Well it sover i feel ost and hopeless. so now I shall leave yes leave because i have suffered a bit when Sora flirts with Riku maening it but using it ot kill him.. I think I shall go now...

well i didn't laeve but I was about too... you'd think that the Gods and Goddess would be able to do something but no they don't!

MEH!XO Sora almost won why why does he have to this he could stop and refuse and try to figure out how to rescue his sisters...

Bah! Riku admits his feelings this can lad to good things ne? NE!

so Sephy to the rescue-erm battle? yeah okay I understand the whole light and darkness in Riku's heart the representation through the sword was very much welcomed..

how ironic Sora hurts Riku witht he gift Riku bestowed upon him *sighs* I'll just go to the next chapter now because I am... I'll just go now *drags herself to the next chapter*

well at least sora didn't die but but but ubut1 *wails8 why are you hurting him! *calms down* hm yes well of course he's not gron on me *eyes shift around*

Dark figara! yayness! dark figara is just so smeaxy and well smaexy! why woul he not use them in front of Sora and selphie? they'd understand wouldn't they? ah well your fic (good one by the way) so yeah

meh! RIku is welcomed into the family! how awesome! but but Sora is like sleeping! and also Selphie is obnixious! meheheheheh so unlike Namine...

what! the GOds and goddess are arguing! meheheheheheh yeah Cloud and Yuffie have a go... Of course Cloud has to win but why do Gods have money? I think it be more appropriate if it were called munny you know a la kingdom hearts! yeah aside from that its fine although I dunno what they need it for they are GODS! for Gods sake!

NO why is this happening! Riku was welcomed to the family1 and now this! *sulks* ah well let's see what ahppens I feel for Sora I was in a similiar postion I didn't have ot kill her but i had to get her to like me in order to keep something hidden form my mother it is still hidden but i felt ever so guilty afterwards and i still do i still like her and i hope she forgives me i really... Well *sighs* next chapter is in order...

Wow Sora wakes up with two smaexy people warped about him.. I am jealous to say the least although Selphie is not the prettiest thing around she is attractive but too peppy for me but still smaexy in her own way!

hm riku's reaction to the necklace is surprising truly it is but what can the necklace have to do with anyrthing...

riku is being genrous giving out gold but not really caring... how so like Riku very much like him indeed...

mm Smaexy Cloud wondering how the bloody fuck sora appeared to them ever to suddenly when Sora is in the looking glass!

m Riku's scent so nummy.. *sighs* Sora gets all the luck *sighs* ah well atleast the little peck on the frehead is cute and comforting the begining of a beautiful relationship...

the shivering wa sexy too...a nd then the kiss was welcomed but then Selphie had o ruin it seriously could she do anything more annoying? and how dare she call Riku a royal Slut! I shall have her ehad once I finfish reading this fic!

indeed the bath would have been uncomfortable huh? but the shred of cloth in the tree very mysterious...

and the last final lines are awesome and ever so true stupid Gods never giving me the answer to my Geomatry tests1 no matter how many ytimes I 'pray' or how niely I ask them they ignore my every plea for help! come on they are there to help us and yet they do nothing but watch us suffer!

nuff said must leave now! next chapter! 8raises fist and 'charges'*

wow Riku is caring and who her? i have a n inkling but... actaully I don't poor Riku Sora is angry at him but it is his fault I mean why hurt something Sora loves? but namine is a bit like me except she waers white purre colors and I don't black is my color so yeah..a ndi insult myself and others but let's not get into that..

so during the memory where a paopu fruit is involved and introduced was Riku only but 5 years old? hm seems to be where this story all begis ne?

Kiari and Namine kidnapped wow... not expecting that at all really... I swear being honest

the sword is pretty I luv it I wishi had a sword like that I would treasure it till i died which would probably be at the time i got the sword suicide beckoning me to take the plunge and use the most valuable treasure against me...

hm so Sephy cares? but why should he oh riku reminds him of himself... well they do look alike and Cloud and Leon are not there but who is this person outside the conference room... could it be Ansem?

nuff said must read next chapter

hm so Sora stands up to Riku about the clothes thing yes in character good good...

Sora imroves throughout training! good good still in character...

sora doesn't think Riku is evil still on character good

Riku thinks of SOra before he sleeps OMGods we didn't se that coming! *rolls eyes at her own sacasticness* ingore me I am just moody right now I do not mean to insult you or anything just depressed is all..

The Gods and Goddess hoping for Riku to jion them... okay then i think I like that idea...

again Sora is suppossed to be innocent and not think of Riku that way till later but this is your own fic and although I am in a sour mood i think that you must ignore me please I just have to point out things that are wrong but they are not wrong and they are simply awesome! I am happish again or maybe the sugar is catching up to my depression anad leaving depression behind...

aw Riku is taking care of Sora how adorable! but Namine is being suspicious... I like her she makes me seem incredibly sociable! and that is just wrong i am antisocial thus I read fics! but thats not the point...

and they are friends although it is cute how Riku is trying to make himself believe that he doesn't care for Sora or his 'sisters' and Selphie... nuff said next chapter! oh by the way I loved the last lines:

So Sora, I guess you’re now friends with a cruel, two-hundred-year-old murderer. That must be nice. Then again, I get to be friends with a sweet innocent boy with blue eyes and a bright bubbly personality. I wonder, who’s the lucky one?

this is awesome! I luv you! and I hate luving people makes me feel warm and well warm! and that bad truly it is! but anyways how can Sora notice riku's ass and other things if he's been sick and isn't he supposed to be innocent? and Niave? ah well that matters not because I like how it started and how Riku cannot die (as strange as it sounds) and ClOUD! he's a God! *tackles Cloud and shifts* and so is LEON! *stands and tackles Leon and grinds against him* and so is SEPHY! *Tackles and nuzzles Seph* I luv them all! although they've always been gods I maen come on look at their bodies! *stands and places all three men infront of her as a bright light glows behid them* oh they are so pretty! *sighs and turn to you* well anyways I think that i gotta continue ne/ late!

OMG

that was a good ending

awe such a good story! i was worried it would turn out sad but it was all good! yay!

This is one of the best fic i had read in years! But it's sad that sora lost riku for a long time. but ow they're back togather. nice work! _

. Kawaii! wow..awesome fanfic.. *sob* and here i thought that the ending was going end just sad...but it's really nice. (lol, you must be a fan of Yuffie's, huh?)

once again..awesome!

Sora n Riku:Aw poor Sorakitty wants too cwy -

Me: *chibi form* nuh uh! I just got somting in my eye!

Sora n Riku: _;;

Me: OK, I admit it... dat stowy was so beautiful! I'm so gwad dat Sowa and Wiku got to be with eachodder again! Much appweciation!*bows again and again*

I really loved this story. Thank you for writing it. Keep up the good work.

Wow, that's interesting. A nice piece of work.

Holy shit! i'm crying it's so damn beautiful! Thank you this story just made my day, hell! my year! Gods you deserve an award for this story. In fact I'm gonna see if FF will do something like that were you can nominate the best stories for awards each month!

Bless your talent!

Chaos

I love you! this was definitely the best fanfiction ive ever read. I'm crying now as i finish it. you are the greatest writer on this websie, i really hope you keep going with your talent.