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crazy hilarious!

I know it's been a while but this is such a cute story that i really wish you would continue it! Please update this story again!

Hello, new reader here! I read the entire story in one go! Oh, please update this story, it's so cute. The flow of it is a little choppy, but it's just so awesome! Plz update!

-Peace out!

i started reding this story bout a year ago i fond it again and it is still not updated (pouts) still love the cam and hunter parts and the story in general please up date

PLEASE Update soon I must know what happens. WHO

evil space monkey o.o lol nice job it is funny. CUTE too

Can you update chapter 10 please! Can you give me a summary on chapter 10?! What kind of couple is this story repersieing.

I want another chapter please and can you e-mail me.PLease because I love this chapter. PLease e-mail me!

Can you please e-mail me! I want more of this and can there be a tori and blake couple in there or no?

i loved it please hurry up and write the other chapters i can't stand that it is not done yet it rocks keep on rockin!

I really like this story, you should update very soon!

I really like your story. It's really cute. JUst don't take long updating!

Oh good chapter. Lol, carnivals. *Grins* Aw Dusty! So cute! Looking forward to more.

I would read it more if you put it like:

When they got to the carnivals, hands joined, they headed toward the ticket booth, where they bought tickets to use in games, small rides and other various things the carnival used the tickets for.

Smelling the air Dustin pipped out, “Me wunt funnel cake!”

Tori nodded her head saying she wanted some too,

chuckling Shane said after they have lunch, only to get a pout from Dustin.

Seeing this Blake replied, “Then let’s eat lunch, what do you guys want? Not funnel cake.”

Dustin pouted a bit more making Tori giggle.

Its alot less confusing then this:

When they got to the carnivals, hands joined, they headed toward the ticket booth, where they bought tickets to use in games, small rides and other various things the carnival used the tickets for. Smelling the air Dustin pipped out, “Me wunt funnel cake!” and Tori nodded her head saying she wanted some too, chuckling Shane said after they have lunch, only to get a pout from Dustin. Seeing this Blake replied, “Then let’s eat lunch, what do you guys want? Not funnel cake.” Dustin pouted a bit more making Tori giggle.

Well thats all just saying it would make it so much better and less confusing to read ;D