You write Tristan SO well, Surreal13! Like, it's as if you know him and are litterally telling us what he's doing! You rock! ?

AH! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THIS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!

ELYSE ROZEMA

very nice. i'd like to see an update. poor tristen!:(

Wow...I totally love your style of writing! So...dark, and yet so revealing at the same time. I wish you would post more on this double-drabble, or write a story spawned from its plotbunny :)

Of course, 'By Our Own Hands' could very well be that story, and I want you to update that even more.

You captured the moment so breathlessly in this, its addictive. I must have read it three times in the last day, trying to memorize it. Please, please, PLEASE write more, especially Tristan POVs. You do them so well.

Ta for now!

Wow, perfect one shot. Powerful last line in combination with a beautiful title. Nothing to add; just a wonderful scene! Write more! C.