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| Miss Howard 2006-10-13 ch 1, | abuseThought i would check out some of your other stories. This is just amazing. I thought you portayed Grissom wonderfully. My heart just kept melting throughout the entire thing, when he was admitting to himself he loved her, and that he cared. God, you are amazing. You're writing just blows me away. Well done. You have some talent! |
| nick55 2006-03-26 ch 1, | abusewow just found this story. I can't wait to read more. |
| stargatesg1971 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThis fic is full of emotion, and I think you did a great job with all 3 characters, especially Grissom. |
| Eden Eyes 2005-08-01 ch 1, | abuseAwesome... I loved it! :P |
| svcmc 2005-04-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust read this -- what a lovely job! I especially liked the way you portrayed Greg -- scared, tongue tied, but ready to fight for his friend. And Grissom, so loving, yet so trapped! As always, just great writing. |
| taramis 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseDang. For your first attempt at Grissom this is incredibly good. Reading your fic kinda felt like watching Grissom on the TV where I'm all like "Grissom...spit...it...out! Tell her you love her!" Heh. Good writing to get me all worked up! |
| Craz Lollipop-Imp 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abusewo |
| Niggi 2005-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful. Good work! |
| CarbyluvYTDAW 2005-03-02 ch 1, | abuseWell, you did a great job writing for Grissom. I think you captured him quite well. You showed us what was going through his mind, but he didn't say much--exactly how his character is. A man of few words, and the few words you had him say were the right words. Nice job. (>-) |
| DolphinAnimagus 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuse*cries* That was beautiful--I loved the ending bit, "They were home. Together." |
| wanda57 2005-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful!! You wrote Grissom perfectly. Thanks for another great story!! |
| Eaglesei 2005-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. You do a good "Grissom".. Can't wait to read more of your work! |
| rokothepas 2005-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was excellent! You've nailed him perfectly. Well done! I don't know why but when I read the title of your story I started humming Dido's Don't Leave Home and the weird thing is it fits perfectly to this story. Anyway, I loved it. Keep it up;-) |
| Augusta 2005-02-11 ch 1, | abuseYou wrote Gris really well. So, don't worry. Great story. I think CBS should incorporate this into an episode. |
| TERRY - cRaZy ItALian 2005-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI really appreciate the story and don't doubt of yourself 'cause (I think)Griss could really break Sara..and after (Love always must win)they return "friends"! terry |