|Reviews for Hook|
| million 10/24/09 . chapter 1
its good, the only thing that doesn't add up is him having the hook. I mean he could have easily gotten one, but it is really distinguished in the movie when he takes it after berry threatens max
| Ghostwriter 5/3/06 . chapter 1
Interesting. Catch ya on the flip side.
| RabidRaye 11/10/05 . chapter 1
"but then she was gone, like a comet crossing the night sky"
the similes you used add a lot of imagery to the storyline. It's a little gruesome "and wiped the remaining blood from the hook that he had stabbed inside of David" but then again, so is the original movie.
I dont understand why David wouldn't try to run or fight Ben.
But it's a good concept of a scene for the movie, or a sequal to the movie. Maybe more of a struggle between the two would add interest.
| Alexis Rose 6/6/05 . chapter 1
Did he use a hook? I thought he heard it from Barry, Helen, Julie, and Ray when they were telling that ghost story and he heard them talking about it. And then he later used a hook.
But, either way, pretty good story you have here. _