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Radio Driver
2008-08-02 . chapter 34
If youre going to have songs in this, put some rap in it. Keep on keepin on.
Knyght
2008-07-25 . chapter 33
I really like you fics(part of it is that I like first pov narrative), and since i think you are doing a good job I'll just add you should stop writing "self-inserted" in the disclaimers, cause it is insanely hilarious to a mind trained in the arts of vulgar jokes.
Andou Masaki
2007-03-10 . chapter 28
Benji-san...! The story getting really well as well as the part of the song that Benji sing for Maria. I hope you update this fanfic soon...

Other things is...how's the other group beside TeiGeki like those geisha that benji save before...? Are they become a pilot/ user of Kishi as well...?

Update soon...!
ranma hibiki
2007-03-09 . chapter 28
undead and demons avoiding a PMSing school girl..gee, i wonder why!?
excuse the sarcasm. im still kinda down after reading the large bit with TB
ranma hibiki
2007-03-09 . chapter 27
YAY FOR CARNIVAL'S!
that and massage's, they are very good when you know what your doing ^_^
rx79guntank
2007-02-12 . chapter 23
Finally the Hanagumi get some really big teeth... And Kohran appears too.Would really like to see more of her in your chapters.
rx79guntank
2007-01-10 . chapter 22
Man, is Benji realy going to string along all the girls? I feel that disaster is going to happen when it comes for him to choose his real beloved.

The new scenarios part was interesting. Sumire's one was great! Really hit the romantic tone in there and the sacrifices of being famous, but I feel the line in there “You are so dead Benji!” seemed really out of context. I dunno, but such flowery stuff isn't befitting her character's lingo or the time period. Anyway, great work on the chapter.
Wing Omega
2007-01-01 . chapter 22
Why isn't there going to be a Benji x Kohran scenario?
rx79guntank
2006-08-31 . chapter 21
At long last an update!

Benji starts to recieve a koubu for himself and strange things start to happen... What is the strange visions he's having? leftover genetic memory of a past life? An actual transportation to the past? This is starting to get real interesting. And the 'Kanna's breasts' lines was hilarious.
Ryokos Bro
2006-08-30 . chapter 20
sup dude been a long time :) good to see your keeping up the stories excellent job keep it up ^^
Wing Omega
2006-07-02 . chapter 20
A good sory but are you ever planning to finish any of your older, incomplete Sakura Wars stories?
Wing Omega
2006-07-02 . chapter 1
Some of the paragraphs seem a little long and identing the first line might help some.
rx79guntank
2006-07-02 . chapter 20
Nice action packed chapter! The battle with Penconha was really violent; I could even feel myself wincing from reading about Benji's dislocated shoulder. I liked the omake, It was really funny- just like straight out from the game. Keep up with the updates!
rx79guntank
2006-02-13 . chapter 19
First I would like to say that I haven't read a story like this in a long time... It reminds of why I like to read fanfiction in the first place; lot of interesting ideas, humor, and chemistry between the characters. Those indecent situations Benji end up in are really funny.

I see that your writing has improved over the chapters, which is a ood thing, as I have to admit your early ones were quite a headful to read. Do please update your new chapters, the cliffhanger is really getting to me.
SilverBlue Dragon
2005-11-11 . chapter 19
wow, long time no see... it's good seeing a new chap of that story :o) It's a really nice chap, i love it. It's so nice fo Banji to help the geishas! :o) Very noble! :o) i do think it's spelled geishas and not geixas in english, but now that i'm learning protuguese i know why you wrote it that way... hehehehehehe ;o)
I must say though that it's not like you to write that shortly, without the details, you got me a little confused over you and worried... Is all ok, with you my friends? >_< ... And a constant remind (i forgot to write it in the review for "Runaway Flower" though it applied even more there than here) - you should do something about grammar, you're slipping... i think you were better before...
Anyways... Good chap, can't wait to see what will happen next... Keep up the good work! Best wishes, SilverBlue ^_^
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