im not flaming u but i just need to say that it was hard to read because i didn't no where there was a scene change...
other than that i think it's a good chappie!
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write a sequal, thought it was good i mean what happens with the neckless and stuff ... ? ;p

good fic but u desperatly need more paragraphs!

this is such a great story but...its so hard to read! you should include WAY more spacing, it would give you so many more reviewers

it was great! i loved it so much! It confused me a little though... So... the whole thing was a dream? wow. I loved the detail. Very descriptive. It was so good. I'm going to look for the other fanfics you've made. I hope they're as good as this one.^-^

*squeals* KYAA! Itachi and Sakura its so fun to see sasuke and Naruto ** I'm gonna look at da next chapter!

nice^^ cant wait to finnish the rest of the storry

It was all just a dream?!
Well, that was unexpected.
Nice first attemd.
Too bad it's already over.

Well, I can understand Gai's team and Sakura's teammates... I can even understand why Ino's team is going... but why Hinata went (not that I'm not happy with that, but...).
Anyways, nice chappie (I especially liked that towel part... what did you expect, I'm a man too ;) ).

Hidden in the Trees? I actually had the same idea... I wonder if I should change it now?
Anyways, it's good to know that Hinata is going to appear!
I wonder how it'll end.

ARGH! Interupt in the moment like that?!
No fair!

Sakura knocking everybody out? Even with some demon inside her that sounds a bit off.
And ItachixSakura... that's creep!
But the story is still pretty good.

Not bad. Well, the battle scene was rather skipped and for an action/adventure story it seems to be out of place.
But overall the story is still pretty good.
Nice job.

This is still pretty enigmatic. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Well, I noticed some grammar mistakes, but above that the story is pretty good (though I don't like the fact that everyone is hot on Sakura...).
Anyways, I'll keep on reading for sure!
Good job.