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nwyd
2009-12-04 . chapter 5
wow. neji is nice. O.o please update!! i wanna see what happens!
morgan666
2009-02-19 . chapter 5
omfg!! continue! i luv tha polt nd evrything!1 yhu ahr awsome!@!@#$%^&*()_+
Claudia
2008-11-11 . chapter 5
is this the last one or is there more?
Claudia-Hyuga
2008-11-11 . chapter 5
very nice ^^
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2007-12-28 . chapter 5
-prods you- come on, update this, please, even if its only a short chapter. This is a really good story, and the characters all act like they should, so please update.
TheBeingOfEverything
2007-02-23 . chapter 5
this fic is so awsome!
please update soon, i cant wait for the next chapter!
lilz
2007-01-01 . chapter 5
i really like this story, hope you haven't given it up. cool plot and i happen to love all of the ships so im happy :) please update, or something! you can't just let an awesome fic like this die out!
Censes
2006-10-03 . chapter 5
I really like this story, you're portraying Neji nicely so far, he's still kinda aloof but he wants to help Hinata. Gaara is also very nicely written out. I don't know if you'll continue the story, but to not finish a story with this much potential is a shame. Keep up the good work!!
Purple1
2006-09-06 . chapter 5
Oh very very nice!
Anon-Flame
2006-08-18 . chapter 5
shame your having problems with writing the next chapter, I don't really get the plot but I think it's really good, that and the only pairing I actually like is Temari/Shikamaru and this one is written brilliantly.

hope you'll find some time to try to write the next chapter, I'm curious to find out what happens
SweetStealer
2006-07-16 . chapter 5
wow...that was pretty deep. i like all the detail...update please

+ adds to favs.
xJihyex
2006-06-24 . chapter 5
This story is amazing! I wonder what's going to happen to Naruto and if Hinata and Neji can find/save him. I really hope you'll add more soon! Please write more then update this story!!
Baka'sAngel
2006-03-28 . chapter 5
aw..Hinata and Neji make such a kyuute brother and sister. and Gaara!! woo! Gaara! he is so in character. XD
Mikomi no Tsuioku
2006-02-17 . chapter 5
Hm... well written story, I'd like to see an update soon...Welp, I like it so random props!
KUURI26
2006-02-16 . chapter 5
I'm confused... why do they want Naruto? What's with Neji? I thought he hated Hinata? I do know Hinata so cool! She my favorite! :)
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