 Baconfat 2005-02-13 . chapter 1I think I read the first two back on ff_drabble, and can't remember if I commented on them there. If I didn't, I should have, because man! Totally cool. I can /totally/ picture Squall and Seifer interacting like that, and I think my favourite part -- besides the killing time line, and the last line, is how I imagine Seifer's expression after that last line. Very cool point, and you fit it all together in so few words. Awesome.
I love the second one, too! Squall being literal and deranged, Rinoa being naive and again, Squall kind of having a good point. I love the first line, and the last line, and the combination of the two.
I like the squall and Selphie interaction in the last one, and there's some great points about their two personalities. Makes me wonder which of them is better off. Thought-provoking. And I love Selphie's little scene with the Mesmerize -- it seems very in-character. |
 Delete me motherfuckers 2005-02-13 . chapter 1wow, really cool. I really liked the first and the last one.
great drabbles! ^^
Hikari Heijin |
 Tseng no Chibi-san 2005-02-12 . chapter 1Very interesting...it's...cute...and weird...and cool al at the same time. Ah...if you don't mind, I'll use what I say to many I stories I like. It kicks arse. Very nice work. |
 DreamCherry66 2005-02-11 . chapter 1 rofl, in my opinion the last two were funny, great drabbles! |
 Squeemu 2005-02-11 . chapter 1Man, these are some powerful drabbles. I'm amazed you fit so much into so few words, not to mention they're written so well.
Seifer killing time is great, not just because it's /Seifer/, but because of the connection to time, and time compression and what Ultimecia had been trying to do.
[Weren't the losers supposed to be repentant?] was a really good line, one of my favourites. It's a tough choice between that and [Fame always fades. But failure, people never forget."] MAN. Squall has a point, a really good one, and one that's gotta have a lot of impact on Seifer.
The second one is, well, really creepy. I sort of don't want to know where he keeps her. I really liked the conversation between Squall and Selphie, too. A good look into their characters and symbolism and everything. Awesome. |
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