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| firefly 2007-07-07 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis story is really good! Please continue to write. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thanks... firefly |
| David Swinton 2006-12-16 ch 5, | abuseBastante bueno el capítulo. Alguna palabra se me ha escapado, pero en general se entiende bien. Lo bueno sería que se encontraran David y Adrian. Saludos: PD: estoy escribiendo un fic epro lo hago poco a poco, espero poder publicar algo mañana. |
| USMELLLIKEMYDAD 2006-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseLook, there's a few thing's I need to say: Your fic sux. It's a giant pile of steaming poop. No storyline nothing I think you are just as bad as your fic... And the movie was just as bad! Stop writing this fic... I hate it! You sux at this man... I've read a better pokemon fanfic... and even that was pushing it... Finally: Try doing something decent like A BETTER MOVIE... GEEZ! |
| shelby 2005-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked it! I sthat the first or the last and when is the next one coming soon? PLZ! i need 2 no what hapnes next! please notify me or suntin! 13/f/nc see ya! |
| Animemaniagirl 2005-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI've read that Virgin Suicides story before. It had been about the Lisbon parents having a sixth child, a girl, named Leslie (I think that was her name) a year or I don't know how many after Cecilia, Lux, Bonnie, Therese and Mary were gone. I like the way your story's going so far. |
| Ermite 2005-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI'm not familiar with the Virgin Suicides, but I like Alternate Universe stuff. I'm writing this after my first reading of the story. At first I thought there was an elegaic tone to the narrative but then there seemed to be a twist and the story takes a different angle. I'm going to read it again. I know I'm going to anticipate another chapter. |