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Reviews For: Twisted Roots

firefly
2007-07-07
ch 5, anon.
abuseThis story is really good! Please continue to write. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Thanks...

firefly
David Swinton
2006-12-16
ch 5,
abuseBastante bueno el capítulo.
Alguna palabra se me ha escapado, pero en general se entiende bien.
Lo bueno sería que se encontraran David y Adrian.

Saludos:
PD: estoy escribiendo un fic epro lo hago poco a poco, espero poder publicar algo mañana.
USMELLLIKEMYDAD
2006-06-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseLook, there's a few thing's I need to say:
Your fic sux.
It's a giant pile of steaming poop.
No storyline nothing I think you are just as bad as your fic... And the movie was just as bad!

Stop writing this fic... I hate it! You sux at this man...

I've read a better pokemon fanfic... and even that was pushing it...

Finally: Try doing something decent like A BETTER MOVIE... GEEZ!
shelby
2005-05-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really liked it! I sthat the first or the last and when is the next one coming soon? PLZ! i need 2 no what hapnes next! please notify me or suntin! 13/f/nc see ya!
Animemaniagirl
2005-03-11
ch 1,
abuseI've read that Virgin Suicides story before. It had been about the Lisbon parents having a sixth child, a girl, named Leslie (I think that was her name) a year or I don't know how many after Cecilia, Lux, Bonnie, Therese and Mary were gone. I like the way your story's going so far.
Ermite
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseI'm not familiar with the Virgin Suicides, but I like Alternate Universe stuff. I'm writing this after my first reading of the story. At first I thought there was an elegaic tone to the narrative but then there seemed to be a twist and the story takes a different angle. I'm going to read it again. I know I'm going to anticipate another chapter.
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