please please please update!

This story is really good! Please continue to write. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Thanks...

firefly

Bastante bueno el capítulo.
Alguna palabra se me ha escapado, pero en general se entiende bien.
Lo bueno sería que se encontraran David y Adrian.

Saludos:
PD: estoy escribiendo un fic epro lo hago poco a poco, espero poder publicar algo mañana.

Look, there's a few thing's I need to say:
Your fic sux.
It's a giant pile of steaming poop.
No storyline nothing I think you are just as bad as your fic... And the movie was just as bad!

Stop writing this fic... I hate it! You sux at this man...

I've read a better pokemon fanfic... and even that was pushing it...

Finally: Try doing something decent like A BETTER MOVIE... GEEZ!

I really liked it! I sthat the first or the last and when is the next one coming soon? PLZ! i need 2 no what hapnes next! please notify me or suntin! 13/f/nc see ya!

I've read that Virgin Suicides story before. It had been about the Lisbon parents having a sixth child, a girl, named Leslie (I think that was her name) a year or I don't know how many after Cecilia, Lux, Bonnie, Therese and Mary were gone. I like the way your story's going so far.

I'm not familiar with the Virgin Suicides, but I like Alternate Universe stuff. I'm writing this after my first reading of the story. At first I thought there was an elegaic tone to the narrative but then there seemed to be a twist and the story takes a different angle. I'm going to read it again. I know I'm going to anticipate another chapter.