Wow, this was deep. I just loved this chapter, I can't wait to read more!

Great story, can't wait for more.

Achitka!! It's great to read your work, again! I've been away from for too long--really missed your stuff :).

Wonderful dialogue!Or perhaps I should comment on how much I adore your characters! I certainly can't wait to see what happens next! Take your time, though (I have to do a quick review of the previous chapters, first, haha :) )!

Good luck with all the updating!!

This is such a great story. You do a good job of integrating all of the OoT elements into your own plot. The descriptions, apart from a few run-ons, are nearly seamless.

Your characterization is great too. Lunnaei particularly is very belieavable and I love how you've furthur developed Malon and "Rinku". The running subplot with Lem is a good addition too and I hope you continue with that.

I'll be watching this story now. Keep updating! It's just getting good. ^_^

Yeah . . . not a big fan of Mary Sues. unless they're good and make sense and have me in it (jk on the last one).
Reviewy stuff:
Amazing. You could be like famous (famus? famuos? I can't spell) someday. And then I'll be like, "I reviewd her! Yeah, man!!"
Okay, but you need to work on, as my teacher calls it, "Character Developement." I don't really know much about anyone. I like to see the thoughts. It makes me happy.
The idiot's done rambling. I want more!! More story!

Sad!! WAH!
I love it. It's so adorable. I have no clue what i mean!

That was cool!
I've gotsta do some homework (yayy . . .), so I'll read more 2morrow

Oh wow, sorry it took so long to review this chapter ^^;! Lunnaei is so cute :)! Awesome job, once again! You never cease to amaze me with your writing, and what's even better is that I really REALLY enjoy reading your fics! Sweet!
See ya :)!

--evanesced-twilight04

Ga...can't believe it took me so long to realize 'Rinku' is Japanese for 'Link'.

wow, this hasn't been updated in a while, and im glad it has.

heh, im surprised im lost for words on this one!! sorry, but the feedback i can give you ATM is that the dream sequence was fine, not too out of place, and it fitted well.

Well, the only thing left is; Happy New Year! and give us more chapters!! :P

Yeah, you're right, it is late. I actually read this five minutes after you posted it...I need sleep...but...can't...go to bed...
Anyways...once again, great chapter! I loved meeting Malon for the first time in OoT ^^ she's so cute! And it's a really good idea of yours to add in dialogue from OoT...it brings back memories...sniff...
Thanks for the update!

--evanesced-twilight04

Wonderful chapter! I actually waited to read this chapter after finals so I could reward myself with a good read! Thank you very much for this chapter :)! I probably aleady told you this, but you have a wonderful writing style! I can picture each setting so vividly, and the characters really come to life! There's no unrealistic dialogue here! Huzza!
--evanesced-twilight04

Glad you updated. This is nicely done and I hope you keep on updating.

Been a while. Bwahahaha...I never get tired of general names. Nice.

Finally an update! This is a wonderful story and I look forward for future chapters. Please continue and don't take so long next time! ;)