Reviews for The Remaining Sunlight

aethelswin 2005-05-27 ch 6,	abuseYou have some nice touches. I particularly like the Spartans' "organized rabble." A bit more care on proofreading would help. Aki seems maybe a bit too human in earlier chapters. I think if she were given more of an inhuman edge, chapter 6 would work better and so would the whole idea of her revolt. Anyway, I hope you get your school break soon and can add to this. Your readers are getting anxious!
Reflectivity 2005-04-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseThank you for your comments, it is always comforting to recieve feedback on a story. To answer your question, no, I have not given up on this story- I am going to finish it, but at the moment my spare time is taken up revising for my exams. I may start working again on the story around June.
Sati James 2005-04-13 ch 5,	abuseHave you given up on this because it is very well written and shows great potential if you continue it.
Sati James 2005-04-11 ch 6,	abuseAn excellent piece of work. Has the tech of the factions allowed for the development of choppers, neddlejets, missiles, gravity ships or hover tanks yet. If the Uni has a prototype gravity ship and the spatans a prototype hovertank battalion then things could get quite...intersting for forman Domi
Regal 2005-02-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat job. It's rare to see new Alph Centauri fics these days.