 iheartmwpp 3/23/09 . chapter 1Heh heh, nice. Take that, you traitorous bastard!
Wait...HINATA! ITACHI! NOES!
Ah well, still worth it. |
 Madam Grey 6/20/08 . chapter 1That was so good. The ending! :o D; it makes me sad... |
 n00bshoes 4/15/07 . chapter 1Ouch. Good story. |
 HannahSakura.Pinoy 4/5/07 . chapter 1Oh... wow |
 MS 11/19/06 . chapter 1That was incredibly dark. Well crafted and thought out. I love your work, keep up the good job. |
 dreamlifter 10/3/06 . chapter 1Loved the story, the Hinata Naruto marriage, epidemic in Konoha, everything that showed that life kept going and that the encounter was in the future. I guessed it was Itachi in the bag, but not the motivations for Naruto. Great story
I think there was a bit too much of 'bold' used, italics would've been better, yeah thats my shitty small criticism |
 unlucky desert rider 5/31/06 . chapter 1i hope you make this longer cause i wanna see what happens next |
 thechickenlittle 1/28/06 . chapter 1whoa. very dark indeed.
but very well written. |
 Mistress DragonFlame 9/9/05 . chapter 1Haha, take THAT you tratiorus bastard! |
 Angelic Master 9/1/05 . chapter 1Very good! I'd like to read the story about what happened before this story. If your willing to write it. |
 me me me and only me 7/5/05 . chapter 1 huu... _ very grim
Nice fanfic |
 Hiei Girl 003 6/26/05 . chapter 1 OHMANTHATWASFREAKINGAWESOME! UPDATE PLEASE! |
 Lady Zephyr 5/29/05 . chapter 1 Oh! *goosebumps*
Personally, I think that Sasuke's chill little demenor should have cracked with disbelief as he reached for that head. The second to last line might have been a bit too mechanical.
Otherwise, another excellent fic! Naruto knew just where to hit Sasuke for his revenge XD |
 ashez2ashes 5/15/05 . chapter 1Whoa, that was awesome. Major kudos to you. That ending line has amazing impact, like a punch to the stomache. |
 Hate 4/6/05 . chapter 1 Oh yeah. Show that bastard!
I actually started hating Sasuke after certain events in anime. First he was quiet and suffering, but still determined to defend his teammates even with his life. But later, he became a whiny b*tch who would do anything for power.
Go Naruto! :) |