Aw that was cute!

WHO, baby, that was so freaking hot, I really loved it!

Heh heh. Fluffy. I prefer Marik, but whatever floats your boat, Author-girl. Really loved the popsicle thing, it sounded SO much like a lemon but really was an icecream and that was genius!

Goodbye and Goodluck!

rofl! that's all I can say...so, I'll say it again! rofl!

oh! I want more too! XDD You're a genious!
"sweet phallic object" OMG! XD TOO funny! XDD

Ooh... hot. xD Fluffy... ... I like it. I was wondering.

I started reading Baku, Ra, to Ringu today, and I tried to go to the next chapter, and it told me it couldn't find the story id. Then I went to your profile, and it was taken off. Which made me sad, since I read and liked the first chapter, and wanted more.

You were mentioning a homepage- does that homepage, by any chance, have the other chapters to that lovely story? Or... have you posted it anywhere else? I'd really like to know, so can you email me at xxkatiekatzxx at aol dot com? That would be muchly appreciated. ^_^ Thanks!

Lol. :D ^-^ Just, lol. And... "Fluffy"? ^-^ I have to give you credit for that... that's funny.

Humorous and interesting. ^_^ lol. Interesting images. Nice one shot.

this sounded wrong. But it's hilarious. It's just like this thing one of my frined sent me once it goes like this: I know this may be sudden. And to ask you would be wrong. But I need a favor of you. And I need it bad. I can feel it go in hard and come out soft. The way my tongue wraps around it and sucks out all the juice. I know this is alot to ask but please, please tell me that you have a stick of gum.

This was so hilarious!

Nice... Funny too. It stirred up a nice mental image. Good job.

I used to eat popsicles/fudsiciles/ the same way but as I got older people stared at me so I just sit there sucking in in my mouth.(The stares didn't change but biting it hurts.so feh to them!)

Ok anyways it was a nice little one shot.