I never reviewed this? o-o I could have sworn I did.

What hould I say? That it's well-written, I love the storyline, the journal entries are cool...you know all that.

It's a wonderful story that you need to update because I've read it three times.

BRAVO! I can't quite put my finger on it, but something just really spoke to me in this chapter. Great job with Zack you did great portraying him, maybe better than me even. Absolutely brilliant! So great its above me and my mediocre reviews so I'll just stop here and read it again. This will hold me over till you finish the next chapter.

Ooh wonder where you'll go next with your story. You know all that time in between yoru updates you'd think it'd be more than two paragraphs. It's still good though, but makes me want to read more. Since you updated looks like its my turn. Great job wtih ur story so far!

Very nice chapter or two if I count 8. Can't wait to read more. Just one thing though. Raine being best at what she does? Maybe its just me...isn't that a little Logan or Wolverine? but hey thats just me.

When are you going to update? I know you have the next few chapters done; I've read them. -evilish grin- Update soon!

I'm finally in the fanficcy! Yah! It's perfect, Dark, just perfect!

Loved it, my friend, loved it.

Very nice. So good that your shameless plug made it well worth the read. Interesting english accent. Well yes do keep up the good work.

At the first three chapter I was wary [ you seemed to think You were writing more than you actually were] but by the end the story had actually gotten plesantly interesting...!! Update

Cool story

Good... *perks a brow* You made Kedo sound quite evil. I can easily imagine him on Magneto's forces...or even creatign his own villian team. Very skilled; can't wait for the next chapter.

THE **'S HERE! Namely me! -laughs- Ami was right, this is great! Are you gonna' make it into a lemon? O...or a yaoi? Or...

Hey there! Wow! This is very good so far! Um...but when are you going to add in Mizu?

Pretty cool, liked it alot.

Great job Darkness. keep up the good work. Update soon, k?