 USAFChief 2009-08-05 . chapter 15I am really disappointed that you have never finished this story. I sincerely hope that nothing bad has happened to you to cause you to give up writing - you have a great deal of talent. |
 Hope06 2009-06-16 . chapter 15I see it has been a while since you last touched this story I am just hoping that some creative idea comes to mind and that you will eventually continue the story becuase I am loving it! |
 grypas 2009-02-05 . chapter 1May I ask for more? Please? I loved Loganizing Tony and I'm glad I found your sequel! |
 Dreamer22 2009-01-01 . chapter 15dun dun dun! tehe I am greatly enjoying this story and I can't ewait to read more and find out what happens!1 |
 TheNaggingCube 2008-12-20 . chapter 15Glad to see this story back. Can't wait for more.
The team has taken Tony back but everyone is still adjusting... enjoying the ride. |
 havocmangawip 2008-11-15 . chapter 15I was so happy to see that you updated! Your story is on an archive that mine is on... I was checking in.
I just have to say, this is such a great piece. You've captured all of the characters perfectly.
You've written Tony so well and I'm impressed with the detail you've included about his injury.
I am a huge Dark Angel and NCIS fan, so this was just too good not to click.
Good luck with the writers' block! |
 moms5thchild 2008-11-03 . chapter 15HURRAY HURRAY HURRAY!
More chapters!
I would have reviewed earlier, but my damn alerts stopped working.
Kas, my sweet friend, it is so good to see this and even though time has passed between postings the story feels smooth and continuous-I know because I re-read the whole thing before I commented.
One thing I notice is that Johnson's father is never given a first name and Tony hasn't met him yet. O, a big revelation is coming when they meet. You are dancing quite neatly around this but my baser instincts say this is all buried deep in Tony's past.
I am liking the interactions between Tony and Kate and McGee. Despite the usual banter a growing respect and friendship is clearly seen. You are introducing it slowly and quite naturally and Tony doesn't even realize its there. I like this.
I hope to see more of Irene DiNozzo and Gran. They are great characters. AS for Papa Dinozzo... well, girl, something is going to happen even if it is Joe not stopping Tony from visiting his mother.
More more more... I grow impatient. And I promise to get back to my own stories too.
Another Procrastinator;
Mom |
 orca589 2008-10-20 . chapter 15Nice little addition to further the story...hm a gym bag. Tony letting Kate drive his car he must have been in real pain in more ways than one LOL |
 jtbwriter 2008-10-18 . chapter 15Whoa-you're back! Thanks for continuing this...and for
Kate's taking care of Tony-but what's in the gymbag?:) |
 Beth Pryor 2008-10-18 . chapter 15Oh wonderful! Not just an update, but an exciting, suspense-filled one that advances the story. I'm so glad you were at least mildly inspired and hope that more comes to you soon. Great job so far; this is one of my favorite storys on my alert list. |
 JenB 2008-06-18 . chapter 14I love your work. I read The Loganizing of Tony first and fell in love with it. I was thrilled to find this sequel. Please post more and soon. I like this little universe you've created with a paralyzed Tony. And am amazed at the descriptions of him transferring to and from his chair. Do you work in a medical field or did you research everything? Good work. Please keep it up and post more soon.
JenB |
 super em 2007-11-24 . chapter 14Just found this and I've really enjoyed reading it :) Hope you update again soon! :):):) |
 A-zla 2007-08-06 . chapter 14Great story! I love your portrayal of Tony...
I hope you will write more soon, it's great to read! |
 Kyre 2007-07-26 . chapter 14OK, I admit it's been a while and I'd kind of forgotten where the story had left off, so Tony's recount to Gibbs was a handy refresher. Thanks. ;)
Hee...Tony's proud of Kate...I like that. Despite all his teasing I think he does admire her.
Short review tonight - brain's almost turned off for the evening - but I hope it's not too long before you can write & post another chapter! |
 Zassa 2007-06-26 . chapter 14Yess! You made me happy:-) I really enjoyed it, and I am of course waiting for more
Zassa |