Oh, I liked it! Poor NiGHTS! *cries* Oh wait... how does NiGHTS die? Oh well. I don't wanna know. *cries again*

poor NiGHTS @.@

NO! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILLED HIM! -sobs-

it was good i liked NiGHTS' lines up to the point he died!
yay! jackle made a apperance too!

Great writing. A strange ending, and somewhat anti-climatic, but - great writing.

!! !! AH! *is really angry*

-Smacks Wizeman- BAD. BAD. YOU DO NOT KILL NiGHTS. He needs to live so he and some bratty children can kill YOU. DDx

Or... are you just teasing and he's alive like I hope he is? e.e

Interesting plot.

Poor NiGHTS, man that was harsh what Wizeman did to him...

Hey! That seems a little similar to my story (not in my fanics yet). I have different characters of course so I'm not trying to steal your storyline. It's really gory...me like *devilish smile*

wow...O_o...

OMG! Poor poor NiGHTS. I should make my friend, Sarah, read this. she would like the whole Jackle thing... ^^ i loved it! poor poor nights...

dude that was a pretty violent end for NiGHTS but still, it was AWESOME! ^_^ I'm more of a Jackle fan. And speakin of him, he's kinda, creepy here. I mean, he was gonna make the bat wingless. Ok, yeah I'll stop. But this story was really cool. You should really think about continuing it. It deserves a sequal ^_^

That made me want to cry. . . . :(
It was excellent though. I'd just like it if you wrote more.
Maybe NiGHTS isn't as dead as Wizeman thinks? ::Hopeful::
I wonder if the dream realm will really collapse on Wizeman's head. . . it's an interesting thought.

Ok, I have one thing to say... WHOA! How do you write stuff like that?!?! Very good, and I won't kill you either.

The only thing I would change is the part when Wizeman said "... taken that Ideya like I ordered you too!", the 'too' should have been 'to'.

Apart from that one thing, there is no other criticism.

Well Done!