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| I'm Just Drawn That Way 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseMaking my work-at-home day more bearable by interspersing with fan fiction... This one was great. You do such an incredible job of writing both Lupin & Snape. I was taken aback (as was Lupin) by Snape's easy manner with Matthew, but his explanation at the end made perfect sense and gave me new insight into his character. Really beautifully done, as always. |
| ShadowBallad 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThat one was really nice too! I liked the way Remus described Severus as a puzzle; a conundrum, something to ponder over but never really solve. Come to think of it, it is a really accurate picture of Snape. Only one question: Where can I get some Snape-coloured glasses? :) Cheers, Ballad |
| Tcalo 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuseHi, I LOVE THIS STORY! it has been in my favory stories for a long time but I just re-read it and I just wanted to say it's GREAT! I love your way to describe, and definetly the couple Severus-Remus is the best ever! |
| shadowycat 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was a wonderful story. Viewing Snape through Lupin's eyes was so beautifully done. The pacing was just right, and the ending was very satisfying. Really a pleasure to read. Thank you. :) |
| kitfreaks 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abusewow unlike almost every other story about lupin and snape i have read i actually liked that. |
| Mikhyel 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuse>^_^< I like this fic. It's nice. And it's good to see one where it's not all, 'I love you!' 'I love you too! I've only been a bastard since we were kids because you made fun of me when I was 11!' |
| mercutio-rane 2005-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was freaking brilliant! Nothing more I can say. Too well-done for words. :) |
| I Write Tragedies 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abuseAt first I was very apprehensive because Remus appeared to be out of character. In my opinion, I've read much better stories that I hated because the word usage was repetitive and the flow was erratic. However, the only thing that sets this story apart from the others is that it is different. It takes Severus and Remus out of Hogwarts and shows the reader what could happen and develop between the two of them. I think Severus was out of character with Matthew and Emma regardless of the excuse you offered, which I did find interesting. I liked the flipping of Remus as third person and then as first person giving insight into actions and events. This story will be added to my favourites simply for the things I liked although I thought it could have been better. |
| BekaJWP 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abuseThat's a lovely story, it feels really complete- like it's really well put together. I like the observations about Snape especially about him having to have different ways to get round people- I don't think I've seen this version of his spying before :) and of course, the Rem/Sev romance *yay* I liked it! |
| mon 2005-02-13 ch 1, anon. | abusenice and interesting. intriguing. I like your shifts of points of view. neat job. |
| Phinea Rogue 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is truly beautiful. I don't really know what more to say, it's simply brilliant. :-) |
| CuriousDreamWeaver 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written piece. I liked how you mentioned what people liked about the physical aspects of Snape, and how Remus felt about them. The story was a god read with a nice combination of characters. Well done! ^_~ DreamWeaver |
| SarcasmRox 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. I am not a Snape/Lupin fan but this story was so well written and classy. I loved it; the way it was written and the tale itself. You truly have a gift. I do have a slight correction though: ...other that annoyance, aggravation, anger, hatred, and another dozen unpleasant adjectives. Those are nouns actually. Keep on Truckin' (or Writting) :) ~Cydni |
| Oya 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuseHaha, Sev being friend and approachable is definitely weird. I love your SSRL stories. Nice. |
| tall oaks 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. There were one or two spelling errors, though fortunately not character names, which is a major no-no. Very creatively worked and good dialogue. Wonderful characterisation of Snape. His casual genial nature with Matthew and Remus' jealousy of it. Severus' explanation was wonderfully 'him' and on target. It was interesting to have Remus be the person who felt completely out of place. Of course, his choosing to remain with the creature and Snape's appearance to await its death was fine. Good job. |