Very interesting. This begs to have more told.

*sniffs* sooooooooooooo saaaaaaaaaaaaad!

That's so sad!

Wow. I've read a fic like this before, but it was from Minako's point of view. I loved it.

Great story. I am glad that some people know how much Raye loves Serenity/Usagi/Serena/Sailor Moon.

WAAAAAH fav. list is this fic! write more!

It's good. Congratulations. You manage to go deep into Rei/Mars and let us see the sensitive side of her beyond that cold interior she always wore. You managed to potray her failure, her sorrow, her disappointment and her love for those she strive to protect. Maybe next time you could do the same with the other senshi

short but good I liked how you managed to tell the story but mostly tell what was going on in Rayes head keep up the good work.

it's really well written... just sad... ( i love your stories though!

That was just so sad! It was really good. Maybe you could countine with this from each of the sailors POV. I sure hope you do!

How... *sniff*... saaaad! ;.;