I like a mildly serious Kyouraku.

They fit well together. Very nice!

D'aw, how sweet! I think you really captured the essence of this couple very well in this fanfiction. Not only are they well-characterized but you managed to do it in a rather short fanfic as well.

Great job.

very nice

This is just love. :D

awesome stuff.

Soft this and tuned to a quiet.

The sequence is easy too and the entire context is calming.

Very human exchange between the taichou and his fukutaichou too.

Great read overall.

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i really liked this one. beautiful job! :D

Aw! That was cute! I loved it!

I just want to squeal from the cuteness this couple brings! Seriously, Shunsui is SO adorable, and Nanao is so in character, and the way you write is just...

Well, I just want to squeal. Your dialogue is short, but says everything that needs to be said. You've done it again!

good one! my first shunsui and nanao fic! and you've inspired me to read more! :D cookies for you!

Oh god, I love these two.

Shunsui seems to be carefree all the time and Nanao-chan so serious - the perfect combination for opposites attracting. It's addictive

What I loved the most was the last exchange between them. When Nanao said "I follow you" and he answers with "and I won't lead you astray." They're so loyal each other. It was a perfect ending!

nice. i like how clean the two characters are. i can see this happening in the actual ani-manga

Exellent, most excellent. Please do more fics of these two in the future. You are indeed a most excellent author.

An endearing piece. Makes me feel all warm and tingly. Really nice. _