I smiled so wide when the water balloon was dropped! Great story...NO! FANTASTIC STORY!

That was so dumb. Taking medicine and you didn't even read the whole bottle.

He must beat Alana or Peach will die! Gee, Alana a crazy teenage sorcerous.

The kids got through! Yay! Okay, this is REAALLY FREAKY! So when Zellie knew who was going to die, she petrified them and she knew the kids could get through?

O_O

So Fox is the murderer and Roy is getting drunk trying to get over his worries because everyone thinks HE is the murderer.

Putting red hairs on them!?!? That's so dirty and mean!

Roys past is...painful. His parents were rapist and his dad a homo rapist. His girlfriend wanted him for his being a prince. I'm...shocked. Genuinely.

Poor Marth. This is horrible. SO Roy knows about the murderer. Boy, are those kids in trouble!

You killed off Marth! Poor Link, one of his best friends is now gone.

Cool story! So Roy is this kind of guy and it seems like he doesn't feel welcome in the Smash mansion. So Peach wants to help, and Link is going to help her. COOL!

That was pretty good, I liked it.

OK, I just want to say that i love your story.
I like the style in which you wrote this story, and I think you did a great...no... an awesome job.

G-virus rating = 98 out of 100

My god, this is so good! REALLY!I mean it, otherwise I wouldn't say god. I'm not christian, so you might understand I'm meaning a lot!
Though, chapter 4 was my fav! It was smexy X3... you know what scene I'm talking about...
Anyway, I'm gonna keep bugging you on RK's forum, and keep saying how good this was!
WRITE MORE RxP, YOU DAUGHTER OF A SHEIK! (Oh, that's a good insult... I think...)

I'm adding this to favorites, it's awesome...