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| ptpeach 2006-08-10 ch 11, | abuseI smiled so wide when the water balloon was dropped! Great story...NO! FANTASTIC STORY! |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 10, | abuseThat was so dumb. Taking medicine and you didn't even read the whole bottle. |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 9, | abuseHe must beat Alana or Peach will die! Gee, Alana a crazy teenage sorcerous. |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 8, | abuseThe kids got through! Yay! Okay, this is REAALLY FREAKY! So when Zellie knew who was going to die, she petrified them and she knew the kids could get through? |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 7, | abuseO_O |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 6, | abuseSo Fox is the murderer and Roy is getting drunk trying to get over his worries because everyone thinks HE is the murderer. |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 5, | abusePutting red hairs on them!?!? That's so dirty and mean! |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 4, | abuseRoys past is...painful. His parents were rapist and his dad a homo rapist. His girlfriend wanted him for his being a prince. I'm...shocked. Genuinely. |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 3, | abusePoor Marth. This is horrible. SO Roy knows about the murderer. Boy, are those kids in trouble! |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 2, | abuseYou killed off Marth! Poor Link, one of his best friends is now gone. |
| ptpeach 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseCool story! So Roy is this kind of guy and it seems like he doesn't feel welcome in the Smash mansion. So Peach wants to help, and Link is going to help her. COOL! |
| ACT II 2006-07-09 ch 11, | abuseThat was pretty good, I liked it. |
| G-virus 2006-06-04 ch 11, | abuseOK, I just want to say that i love your story. I like the style in which you wrote this story, and I think you did a great...no... an awesome job. G-virus rating = 98 out of 100 |
| Black Light Princess 2006-05-30 ch 11, | abuseMy god, this is so good! REALLY!I mean it, otherwise I wouldn't say god. I'm not christian, so you might understand I'm meaning a lot! Though, chapter 4 was my fav! It was smexy X3... you know what scene I'm talking about... Anyway, I'm gonna keep bugging you on RK's forum, and keep saying how good this was! WRITE MORE RxP, YOU DAUGHTER OF A SHEIK! (Oh, that's a good insult... I think...) |
| foxdude33 2005-11-06 ch 4, | abuseI'm adding this to favorites, it's awesome... |