Very sweet! I liked this take on Grissoms "date" with Sophia.

And that's truly what unbearable would be! Nicely done, I love your internal dialogues/mental conflicts. Not many people can do that effectively.

Okay, so now you need to follow this way better version up with, what Grissom needs to do to make things right in our world, then fax it over to the power that be.

I was pretty much stroking out too on Thursday. They must be going somewhere with this. I mean why keep making us watch Sara be jealous over Grissom and Sofia?

I think that Grissom and Sara are going to start seeing each other secretly and Grissom is trying to throw everyone off of their scent with the Sofia thing.

No? But a girl can dream right?

i really don't believe the invitation was something other than proffesional, so this was really hard to read for me,but I like Grissoms conclusion

how can that be the end? you just got him to realize that he wanted her know you go and let him get her! she needs im and he needs her! hop to it! no one will mind that you didn't end it here! it would be unbearable to us!

That's exactly what I think the dinner is all about.

Great job... the lab without Sara, Unbearable...

Love the last line. I haven't seen Unbearable yet, but it's nice to see some authors takes on attempting to rectify things. I really love the way you write Grissom's thoughts, it gave me some measure of hope. Nice fic.

That was spot on. It made the whole Unbearable episode bearable.