LMAO! Only Kimber!! Too Perfect!!

To Christina, I doubt you'll see this but I just wanted to let you know I realize this isn't anything that would ever happen on the series. Fanfiction and fantasy are closely intertwined in my brain.
Thanks,
Catharine Suzanne.

This is a funny story. You really captured Kimber's voice.

However, considering what a central issue the Jerrica-Rio-Jem love triangle is to the whole series, I see your story as more of a "Revenge Fantasy" of Kimber's than an event that actually happened in the Jem universe.

i don't like riot

ps. but i liked it.

This is definitely Kimber's voice--and perhaps the way Rio should have been dished the news in the show. Very well done.

why, didn't rio kill riot?

ps. liked it.

Oh snap! I want to see Rio's reaction! This was a great story!

You really seem to know the characters, too--congrats on your first time out!

~two thumbs up~

You know, this is exactly how I imagine how the Holograms must feel.
It'd be cool if you touched upon the fact that the band is called "Jem and the Holograms" instead of just "The Holograms."
The last lines seemed a bit forced, maybe you could make Kimber go "First Ryan, then Daniel and now Brandon?!" just to show how much her temper rises.
Also you could see how Jerrica's and Kimber's relationship plays out now that Kimber told the one person that Jerrica didn't want to tell.
All in all it is a good story and I am eagerly awaiting updates. ^_^

You know I'm surprised Kimber never did that in the series. She was always so hyper and tempermental and does things without thinking of the consequences (like in the first episode when she stormed out sick of the attention Jem was receiving) But good job, you got Kimber's voice down! I am impressed! :D

This is good! You have to hurry up give the readers here another chapter soon.

I LOVED this! Can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG! I just giggled the whole way through. Excellent job! You'd never know this was the first time you were writing these characters. Can't wait to see more of your work.

Oh my god! That was so priceless. I laughed the entire time I was reading it. For a first timer, you're completely spot on. And the ending is perfect. Great, great job.

That was great. Sounds like something Kimber would do. Hope you continue it.

Interesting format. Curious to see how Rio reacts to the news.

sarah