Heat washed heavily in on my cockpit as my Ares was knocked back a few kilometers by the force of STRK missiles crashing into it.

The time for reviews of this story is long past but I believe you mean meters, if a mech were driven back kilometers it would be dusted.

Oops...my bad about my previous post. I was thinking 3135 was actually 3035. Duh.

I'm not an expert on Battletech, but your story is dated 3135 and mentions the clans a lot. In 3135, did the inner sphere even KNOW about the clans? I thought the invasion was a few years later.

Just so you know the Gauss Rifle fires a shell not energy

I don't normally read MWDA fanfic, but this one is too good to be passed. The tension between the characters are amazing. I feel like I'm living every bit of words that I read. A well-executed piece that deserves more reviews.

I hope you'll continue with this story. I'm anxious to see more, and if you continue, this is my first MWDA story I've ever read.

This is StarCaptain Duo Ward "Okamitetsu" of the Wolf Warden Alpha Galaxy under the command of Galaxy Commander Timberwolf1 Kell...
You stravag, surat, dezgra, salama! I demand a Trial Of Grievances for screwing with the brethren of my Khan( and our home on Arc-royal) since he is not here to take the grievance himself.

Now to read it.

Hah! I haven't heard anything about Mechwarrior in years, although I used to be really into Mechwarrior 2. Must be...five, six years ago now, maybe more. T'will be interesting to see how much I remember - already things are seeming familiar. I'm trying to remember the name of the Mech I used to use...from memory, it was a Tomahawk, but I could be (and probably am) wrong. Hmm...

...I just realised I haven't actually said anything about the story yet. Whoops...bloody brilliant anyway, as always. No major flaws to speak of, so keep up the good work!