This story absolutely took my breath away. My favourite CSI fanfiction so far. =]

Ash

Awesome fic... yeah I'm 2 years late on reading it- but still! Thanks for sharing- JenStog

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BEAUTIFUL!
That is all I can say =)

Thank God !

I hope she is okay. I have a feeling you wouldn't kill off Sara.
This is still the most beautiful thing I have ever read in my life =)

You are such a good writer. I love this! Moving on to next chapter.

omg...that was brilliant,fantasic,amazing,emotional,beautiful. i loved it :)

Keep writing "on the edge of your seat" stories like this...you do a great job!

Awesome story i'm rereading it for the third time but... um... what exactly does WIP stand for?

This was an amazing story! Well done!

Wow, that was such a beautiful story! You really captured all the right emotions and Grissom's fear of how he felt about Sara, and his fear of rejection. The ending almost made me cry, I am such a sap but I love the whole GSR thing.

WAY TO GO, JAZZ!! WHAT A WONDERFUL STORY!!I LOVE THE ENDING, WOULDN'T THIS BE COOL IF THIS WAS AN ACTUAL EPISODE? SEEMS LIKE ONE TO ME. TEARS IN MY EYES THE LAST TWO PARAGRAPHS. U DID YOUR WORK!! SO THANKS FOR THIS STORY!! IF U WANT TO E-MAIL, THAT'S FINE, IF NOT, THAT'S OK TOO. JUST GIVE ME THE TITLE OF YOUR STORY SO I KNOW IT'S U JUST IN CASE U WANT TO E-MAIL.

THANKS AGAIN! BYE

DEAR "MISS JAZZ" I AM REALLY ENJOYING THIS STORY. I THINK THE MOST DIFFICULT PERSON TO WRITE CHARACTER IS GRISSOM, ONE LINE THREE DIFFERENT MEANINGS, BUT U CARRIED OFF WELL. CAN'T WAIT TO FINNISH THIS STORY. AND THIS WAS YOUR FIRST FANFIC? WOW! VERY IMPRESSED. WILL E-MAIL AT THE END OF THIS STORY THANKS!

P.S. DO U STILL WATCH THE SHOW. SEEMS LIKE A LOT OF FANFIC WRITERS GAVE UP ON THS SHOW, JUST WHEN IT'S GETTING INTERESTING?

hey i was going to wait until the end to submit a review, but i can't wait. you're an amazing writer, i cried through the whole story.