|Reviews for All Fall Down|
| chianna 11/7/05 . chapter 1
I'm really enjoying your stories. They're well written and the plots are intricate.
Just one minor complaint. Almost all the action and perspective seem to come from "Frankie," and after reading a couple of your fics, it starts to sound a bit ''Mary Sue-ish."
If you concentrate on a gal-in-peril theme, you risk turning an exciting spy & action thriller story into a Lifetime channel movie.
I know writing from the male perspective may be harder. But I think your readers will enjoy the more well-rounded perspective and action. And your male characters will enjoy the exercise.
| maestra 2/19/05 . chapter 1
Mel, I don't remember exactly where this falls in the series... we didn't get the last couple of eps here in the states. (Stupid ABC.)
Anyway, I thought your characterization of Frankie was pretty good, though perhaps a touch soft. She rarely gives us a glimpse of her feelings, especially those for Kilmer.
I always suspected Kilmer still harbored some feelings for her though. *wink*
I miss TM.
| drama-freak-csim 2/18/05 . chapter 1
Oh what, I love ya stories, I need more
| fiona 2/14/05 . chapter 1
please write some more! that was excellant, not enough fanfic for threat matrix on the web!
| danielle 2/14/05 . chapter 1
I was hoping you'd write some more TM! Great characterization of both Frankie and Kilmer.