| Reviews for All Fall Down |
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chianna 11/7/05 . chapter 1 I'm really enjoying your stories. They're well written and the plots are intricate. Just one minor complaint. Almost all the action and perspective seem to come from "Frankie," and after reading a couple of your fics, it starts to sound a bit ''Mary Sue-ish." If you concentrate on a gal-in-peril theme, you risk turning an exciting spy & action thriller story into a Lifetime channel movie. I know writing from the male perspective may be harder. But I think your readers will enjoy the more well-rounded perspective and action. And your male characters will enjoy the exercise. |
maestra 2/19/05 . chapter 1Mel, I don't remember exactly where this falls in the series... we didn't get the last couple of eps here in the states. (Stupid ABC.) Anyway, I thought your characterization of Frankie was pretty good, though perhaps a touch soft. She rarely gives us a glimpse of her feelings, especially those for Kilmer. I always suspected Kilmer still harbored some feelings for her though. *wink* I miss TM. |
drama-freak-csim 2/18/05 . chapter 1Oh what, I love ya stories, I need more |
fiona 2/14/05 . chapter 1 please write some more! that was excellant, not enough fanfic for threat matrix on the web! |
danielle 2/14/05 . chapter 1 I was hoping you'd write some more TM! Great characterization of both Frankie and Kilmer. |