PLEASE CONTINUE SOON

ah! YOur killin' me, your really killin' me. you had better update soon or im going to flip!

Heck yes you should update. That was really good.

SLOW DOWN YOUR WRITING TO FAST UPDATE SOON!

so i far i like it! i just saw eer after and i was amazed w/ it! its a wonderful movie..can't wait for u to update!

Just a quick little thing. Maurice, or anyone of that time period, would have said market, not supermarket.

read the little u have and the AN and think ok... i can wait but u best update soon :P :P nice idea cya x

Umm...You have a very good idea going it was just a little hard for me to follow...but then it's too short to really say anything about...hopw you update soon

-super jet

PS could you read my story and update it?

oh my gosh-that really sucks-that happened to me yesterday. it's awful. well-can't wait for your next chapter-hope it all goes well. ttfn

it's jeanne i just signed in lol yeah i had seen it on tv that day but i had also seen it a while back when it first came out so yeah it's pretty kewl that it was on tv right after you wrote it lol

I really like this it is cute... are you gonna update at all?

i liked it-when it is longer i will be able to say more. ttfn means tata for now (like some British people say and tigger from winnie the pooh)well-good story-update soon...ttfn

Wonderful! I can't wait to read the rest of the story!

i like it, but it is really too short to say much about it. please continue it. ttfn

PLEASE GO ON IT IS A VERY GOOD BEGINNING:)UPDATE SOON:)