Reviews for Picnics are so much fun

Reviews For: Picnics are so much fun

Klaske 2006-12-14 ch 1, anon.	abuse... stare... Wel leuk. Nice.
Do they actually get to hav... 2005-05-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseHahah, that was pretty funny really, not down on the floor gasping for air funny, but light and easy going laughs. I'd offer some advice since "A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer." but this seems to be a fairly easy going work of fun, so all I could say is go with it and have fun.
Keahi Mitsahima 2005-04-17 ch 1,	abuseYes, CONTINUE this! Put a bit of DMC in it if you like.
Dark Masamune 2005-03-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey nice! I loved the beginning part with Sephiroth and how "to be considered even a mere ANGEL would be blasphemous" LOL! XD I think you should carry this on but just don't make it too long or it might be a bit of a drag. But you seem to going along the right track and the thing about Lulu's pregnancy is funny! I mean game designers are usually dying for an excuse to make a female character's breasts bigger and they had the ideal chance with Lulu being pregnant yet opted not to... Bizarre! o_O Seymour input:: Well please try to stray away the homosexual and paedophille jibes that Seymour always seems to unnecessarily get aimed at him. Also, no mocking his voice either! waves finger But maybe do some preaching about life being a path of pain & sorrow etc. And being obsessed with Sin of course. Peace out! DM
Tincent 2005-03-19 ch 1,	abusehehe, that was er umm strange. But strange is good. I mean coming from me, I live for bizzare fanfics. Eh, it's cute but ya didn't have Tifa or Vince in it from what I could tell. ~purrs~ But no complaints for having Sephy-poo in it. He's so yummy is he not? Ah also, the reviewed post before mine said something about Dante Sparda I think? Oh man I'd die a million times over if he made an appearance. I so want to do things to that man...~coughs~ better not say... Anyways, the beauty of cross over fics (especially OOC humor cross overs) are so much fun to write. I think it'd be cute to see if you add anyone else from the final fantasy series or my two all time favorite characters (tifa and vince) in it. And not to mention Dante Sparda... good lord he's so damn.. anyway! Moving on.. hehe. I adore Dead or Alive so any of those characters mixed with Final Fantasy... man i could go on for days but I shall wrap up this review, Continue if you would like, Take Care
Bustahead 2005-02-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI don't see why you shouldn't continue. It was amusing to say the least! ^_^ GO FOR IT GO FOR IT and maybe we cn randomly have Devil May Cry in there... or not.
Carlos 2005-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it! Maybe its because im silly, or maybe its because I like everything you write, but I definitely think you should continue this.
Carlos 2005-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it! Maybe its because im silly, or maybe its because I like everything you write, but I definitely think you should continue this.

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