Hm...interesting. I like the little bits of Hermione and Draco muses in the end, they are so entertaining.

good so far

this is intresting...

draco and blaise?what have they been doing hermione?

o update soon!!

Wow, okay, you've done a great job! Enough creativity to start your very own story, where YOU own everything! Well, ok, not just yet, but, wow, extremely close! You've got a great storyline set up so far, continue with it! The one and only thing I'm even remotely lost on is the voices in Hermione's head during the black outs she has, but it's very obvious we'll learn what's up soon enough, just as every great author clues into! Keep up the GREAT work! And remember: constructive criticism helps, not harms! -Renae17-

*I just wanted to point out... you said constructive criticisms in your end note. I just now saw that.*

This is really good, update soon please
Love Danish
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hhahahhaa that draco hermione thing at the end was hahahha funny! i knowwhat u did last summer...with bliase...hahaha...well update this story is creeping me out!

guess what ! lol ...im soo blonde ( not really im a brunette and no offense to blondes ) I put in a review at chapter 3,4,or 5 im not quite sure anymore ...but I could have sworn that there was no arrow so I could go on and read more chapters so I scrolled up and back down and then i saw the arrow so I could continue...anyways back to you the gifted person who is writing this story...heh...the story is getting a lot less confusing as the story progresses ( thats why I don't read stories w/ just a couple of chapters )again I can't wait for you to update so I can review once again...PLEASE UPDATE SON!

I don't quite understand the story... but as I go over it through my mind I think im begining to understand ... anyways no matter how confused I am its a good story and I hope to review on your next chapters.PLEASE UPDATE SOON !

hm...i like your plot line...but i think you could expand it a little bit. and for the most part, i think you have a good portrayal of the characters, but i don't get why draco would just suddenly want to talk "civilly" to hermione.

WAT DID BLAISE AND DRACO DO LAST SUMMER?!?!? I REALLY GOT TO NO...anyways i like the sotry but its a little confusing...k erase a little...
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THE CONVERSATIONS BETWEEN DRACO AND HERMIONE THAT YOU ADD AT THE END OF EACH CHAPTER ARE REALLY FUNNY. YOUR STORY IS VERY CONFUSING AND IT SURE GIVES ME A HELL OF ALOT TO THINK ABOUT.

haha...with blaise hahaha but why is hermione getting slow not good not good at all..but with blaise hahahahahahahaha

OH MYGOSH! YOU TOTALLY have a 2 thumbs up YOU SO need to update cause ur killin me here! please, please, PLEASE! UPDATE!

this is interesting!! very mysterious. write more soon! :) (and make the chapter longer next time if possible!)