Best fan fiction I've ever read. As both a lover of fanfic and a huge broken sword fan...I thank you

Amazing :D

I'm seriously impressed. That was a really well written story and totally believable in the context of the game. I would have liked to have played these scenes for myself! Well done

That's absolutely brilliant! You write so well. I am so favouriting this!

Very well written, quite enjoyable.

A quality bit of fic.

Great story! Even I could understand practically everything in the fic, although I have played only one of the games (about seven years ago). Khan is an interesting character; I wish I could know more about him. I hope to read the sequel very soon, it seems very promising.

And since you asked to point out the punctuation problems, here are the ones I spotted:

- what else can I do" (question mark)

- but he decided not to . (space before the full stop)

- "What would you have preferred" (question mark)