wounderful no other word for it i really do hope you continue the story its like the best ive ever read but take your time cuz ur doin great!1

everything's moving fast, so hopefully the team can find some answers soon

oh boy, slip up - and much earlier than I thought, this is gonna add some fun

ah, those dresses sounded so pretty, I wish I could see it though. _

Please do continue. My friends and i would like to find out what happens!

Maybe the mall will have a Hot Topic for Rea to hang out in - I'd love to see Star in some of those outfits, althought star gone goth is kinda a strange idea. Oh well. Keep it up :thumbsup:

ah, star's was being unloved, even though it was for good reason. I didn't really see the "Star" and "Rea" team-up coming for the first couple chapters, but I think it's safe to say that now it's definite

random inteligence is fun _ How Starfire worked that in there will forever escape me though... lol. Yay for plot development!

I don't have a sister, but of all the sister's I know, they've all had that sweet moment _ So with the truth starting to come out things are definately bound to happen

ah, she made a heavey bet! lol. That part was cute _ As for Raven, it's only a matter of time now - and if she doesn't tell them *evil laugh* just kidding, but really it seems to be heading for that point ;)

*gasp* cliff hanger! Had be on edge for a bit there, which I'm sure was the obvious intention _

somewhat of a filler, but the breakfast scence was cute! I see that next chapter will perhaps in a bit more of a serious mood though, which is fine, you write both well :)

aw, poor Rea. Well things aren't gonna get better, that's for sure. How else are you supposed to have a fun story? :P Keep it coming!

Yeah, working up to a plot twist I think. Nice character sketchs (not making them OOC) On to the next chapter!

I'm trying to see if we've entered fluff zone, or if it's a brohter sister thing still. Anyways nice ending and nice chappy!