I'm can't wait to read and find out what is it that is ailing Raven. You have a good set up going here. I can't wait to read more to find out what is wrong. I like the bit of humor you put in the beginning, "a taste-testing contest where there was never a winner" I'm assuming that's Starfire's cousine you're talking about. That made me laugh. Keep it up this could be really interesting.

P.S. Thanks for your review, I'm really glad you liked it.

It sounds really good! I cant wait to read the next chapters! Keep up the good work!