   Wanderer of Darkness 11/18/05 . chapter 19yay |
| Crazy Hyper Lady 11/17/05 . chapter 19 AH! NO, why must you leave it there! I need to read more! It's so good, I can't wait! Please hurry |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 1 1.) I only make long winded reviews at the end of my reading, which will be on chapter 19...
2.) THIS IS AWSOME! well, at least it is so far.. i expect to see great things from you |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 2 VERY NICE! could work on action scenes a bit, but it's still great |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 3 very good story.. would like to see how it goes |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 4 NICE |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 5 WOOT! nice job!
this calls for celebration.. BRING OUT THE BEER BOYS! |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 6 nice work! this is a great story so far! |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 7 you know what i'm gonna say..
NICE WORK! hehe.. XD |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 8 nice.. work..
YEAH! keep it up! |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 9 nice! and yes, i'm glad raven finally told.. nice to get such a burden off your shoulders..
nice work@! |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 10 look for full review at chapter 19, cuz i make long revies at the end of my sitting.
anywayz.. keep up the good work@! |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 11 keep it up! |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 12 GOOD JOB! this is a great story |
| Tritium 11/17/05 . chapter 13 nice... |
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