Interesting and entertaining story.

I look forward to more

So the story so far will make Ranma be locked female whenever he isn't using his senshi powers. Nabiki has already manifested time magic, and Ranma needs to be female to access the healing power of Saturn.
Ami's mother has just learned of the secret identity of her deceased daughter, and seems likely to become an ally.

Interesting.

Ohh. Good story. I'm hoping for an update soon. This is just starting to get good! :D

Hi there.
So this a fic were all the Senshi died as thier power source (The Silver Crystal) became depleted, so Setsuna took their star seeds to the past and through them created two new star seeds, which she implanted on Ranma and Akane as babies.
New premise.
Your story flow so far is engaging, too.

nice development. but i think you are gonna need a bigger supporting cast.
writing style is fantastic as always, but would still like a little more work on the transitions, not really a big thing but its not that easy to offer help for something this good...

looking good so far.
but you might want to fix the intro? doesnt look like a poisoning is going to be involved?

Okay, this is definitely different. Off to a good start.

Currently frustratingly incomplete - and I sense that the author has not fully planned out the story arc and is making it up as he goes along. That can, but seldom does, turn out well.

Good luck, and keep on writing.

Hoo hah! Can't wait for the next installment. So, I guess that they will get an amalgam of all the senshi's powers. Can you run down how the split occurs? So, for Ranma to stay male, he must remain powered up? How would this sound? Reincarnate the Senshi through Ranma and Nabiki's children!
Ciao,
Wes

Get rid of those damn roses. Ranma does not deserve being forced to act like the Caped Dweeb. what would be really funny,is Ranma accidentally doing a female transformation and Akane sees but never makes a connection.

Wow, this is a great story. I can't wait to read the next part. I hope Ami's mom takes it okay...

so... what car does Tofu have anyway?
and wouldn't it be easier to carry nabiki and ranma if ranma was ranma-chan?

ok-- here is a major problem i am having, and perhaps you can explain it to me:

When present Pluto goes back in time, wouldn't she have to meet up with past Pluto when she goes through the time gates? When past pluto becomes present pluto, wouldn't she have known what present past-present pluto would do? and how could future pluto vistit the present pluto, if the present pluto was in the past, and never became the future pluto? and how would the past-present pluto have interacted with the present pluto?

i hope that made sence...
speaking of making sence... why the extra water heater? i shudder to think what her electric/ or gas bill might be... depending on how the water gets heated...

not to mention... that part about Setsuna failing... about how she should have pushed them harder... or have them have military training or something... well... why didn't she warn herself? it probably would have been easier...

it would definately cause less property damage.. in the short and long run...

First off... I won't believe that Nabiki would do anything to get Akane in the psyche ward. Blackmailing Akane I could see... mental torture, I could buy, as well as a cover-up Kennedy style (there was a second croch-pot on the grassy gnoll? ne?) I would believe Nabiki would do many things, but without a reason, i don't understand why Nabiki would send Akane to the psyche ward. Because it was the right thing to do? I didn't think this was a comedy.

As for Pluto... well, there's no reason to believe that she is older then every other man or woman on the planet. Time gates giving warnings? what form are these warning in? Is it a beep beep, or can you switch it to am/fm stereo? And how can lunarian be Pluto's native tongue?
And why does she have to go back in time? 'It's Pluto, that's what she does' is not an answer. Wouldn't going back in time use up more energy?

there's just something about the physics that strikes me wrong... Even if the star seeds were in the bodies of the NWC, how can future Pluto give advice to Present Pluto, or Chibi Usa go back in time if the presence of the star seeds are already proof that the time line doesn't exsist?

And what if time happens differently, and they all don't die? can there be a senshi free for all? Can they do it in mud? You are also wrong about using enough power to force a timeline change. Even the simplest action might force a change, or a dramatic event might change little. Would killing Hitler actually prevent World War 2? or was a second world war an inevitable event? there's an uncertainty when dealing with time. We could also look at it as an Oedipal thing... and no... i'm not looking at it like sleeping with your mother... (hold back joke...) It might also be that the reason why they lost in the first place was because of Pluto giving them the star seeds, and thus forfilling the event that was trying to be avoided. The star seeds might of had a resonating effect with the NWC starseeds.

something that does worry me though... please don't tell me Setsuna gave her star seed to Akane... my mind would boggle...

anyway, i liked your prolog. if i didn't, i wouldn't have coomplained so much...

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