... Geeze, that was so... depressing. *sniff* poor Subaru, he's just so... sad. GREAT fic! I loved it. Even though it left me with sad empty feeling, though i bet it's not even close to how Fuuma feels... *sob* oh god! my poor Fuuma! *runs away crying*

i love this story! it's what started me liking Fuuma/Subaru. i just love how it's written and how they're both after the same things. it's one of my favorite fics.

Very interesting and creative. Very good descriptive language. I liked it very much _ Ah, I love your work.

It was very good. First thing off, I didn't like the language... The way I see it, it could have been said a whole lot more subtly, something that fits with the story better than language. yeah, I'm an odd, one, I don't cuss, though don't mind it if it's not too bad. But I feel that in writing, if it's not being used as an expressive means, or chracter dialogue, the word could be replaced with something more subtle.

Anyway, off of THAT, it was excellent. The concept was odd, I read 'Fuuma Subaru' and my curiosity was piqued. It was well described, loved the way you compared what one saw, and what was reality, and how they ignored all these things. Really interesting to read. It gives this whole _mood_ of pretention and ignorance of reality, and made your fic's point very well.

Good job on this, it was different from the norm and intersting to read!

brilliant! simply brilliant! it's a piece of art! please write more!

God, I love reading your fics!

This was an excellent mix tragic and hot. Bittersweet and sensual all at once. Terrific job!

Wow, that was so great! It was really powerful and brilliant, and amazing characterization. I can just see Fuuma and Subaru ending up like this after the whole 'eyejar' thing.

Please write more!

God i love your stuff! This was so sad!Heh...I don't like Subaru/Fumma love(just can't see it!) so this was good...

Thanxx

Love Aida

I knew it! Fuuma and Subaru...playing pretend...*drools*

I hoped to see more 'dialogue' or interaction between the 'most screwed up' X's characters - but oh well, i enjoyed it very much. *wink*

It was a lil difficult to follow at the end, but other than that, beautiful. I adore it. You've somehow managed to capture a portion of the characters' essence and transform it into paper and ink.

Woo - nicely done, Elf! I was surprised by the pairing at first (guess I should meander the X section more), but the way you pulled it off was great. Poor guys, all of them.

Aw, crap, now I have to go through the X section. -_-;;