sequel please

good story. 10/10.

Lol, I love it!

-“Breakfast?” Ash said cheerfully, “I don’t want breakfast! Where’s Pikachu; I wanna battle! ‘Cause I’m the fricking gym leader! Wo!” Ash yelled as he ran into the pool room.-

~Saphire Moon Maiden

I love this story!

...Wow. I'm sure you probably heard this for the umpteenth time, but this is a good story. i won't ask you for a sequel, because as the final chapter suggest, there is a sense of finality in this story. Ok, I'm entering fanboy mode: The interaction between Ash,Misty, and the Eevee kits is SO CUTE! My heart fell when I read chapter two about Blossom, TT_TT, and to add to that, Ash's reaction of helplessness and later doing the grown up thing...^_^. I also admire how you present the wandering Sparky and hint at his possible Umbreon future, and Trillian was a nice touch. And the NInetales hybrid...is that...? Oh well, I guess it's up to interpretation, but Nice speech from Ash about the kits having both parents while examining his own life with his parents...or rather, absence of one.(You couldn't get more star warsian than that with the Ninetales Hybrid and Ash confronting him. O_-)And I love Ash making Misty promise not to let him abandond his familly, it ealy shows his character.This is one of the few good TF fics I like on this site, so Fav +! Jonseycat, out! MEE-YAA!

WOW! That was great! It was very well written and everything was explained. The only bad thing that happened was...it ended. =[ I think that it would be cool to be able to do that, don't you think?

I really like it. At some times it can get boring and drawn-out, but your writing style is excellent, grammar is almost perfect, and the story gives an original twist to a well-worn theme. Bravo!

9 out of 10

i think id rather you do the sequel :)

excellent story & i think you should definately write a sequel to this

Pikachu lowered one ear. "You- um, you do realize what happened, don't you?"
Ash smirked. "Sure. I had a wicked headache and WHAT THE CRAP?" he yelled after finally seeing his new form.

I love that quote.

This is a great idea. I myself was turned into an Espeon, so i can relate. Of course, I'm quite happy like this.

I'm obsessed that way. Aren't I, ebony?

Ebony-Yes. Mad too. And addicted to L...
Me-Stop now.

~General Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince, out.

This story is great you should continue.

This is a very great story and can't wait for the sequel to come!

Do you want to write a sequel yourself or are just wanting to please people, my opion is to write it if a overly huge amount of people want it on a lighter note great job loved it...:3

please write a sequel, cause i love your stories. they are really good! and if you write a sequel, I'm positive will read it! so plz! write a sequel.

this is a really good story!! i loved read it!! ~condawg1~