Hey cuz are you ever going to finish this? It's been awhile lol

Excellent beginning! Grabs the imagination! We need the rest of the story!

Good story can't wait to see where you are going with it.

Julia

It's great to finally have some new Heat stories. This one has started out great, keep it up!

Oh no! What in the world is someone trying to do to poor, sweet Luke!

I'm itchin' to find out what happens next, so post the next chapter soon, please?

that was good