Its actually 2 hours and 19 minutes of homework. My god what was she working on.

lol.

Farther? I think you meant father.

well i like this story...

and i also like the loopy person HATE,HATE,HATE,HATE masaya i have no idea why though...

i like kish...ALOT

i love ur stories!keep writing

This story is great because:

1. Mayasa dies (dunno why I hate him, I'm just a vicious 12 year old that loves Kish...)

2. Ryo is evil (I don't actually hate him, but my friend has a crush on him and I like making her miserable- I did say I was vicious)

3. Kish and Ichigo are together! YAYNESS!

Mayasa is dead! WOOHOO! Mayasa is dead! You are so cool! You have great ideas too. MUST READ MORE!

YAYNESS! Really cool and hilariously funny! Ichigo 4 Kish 4ever! YAYNESS!

wow that was short... yay that you got it done though _

I think you need to re-think your writing style. You're not consistent, and flow is minimum.

And her friends are Moe and Miwa. Which is which, I can't remember.

GREAT! I LOVE IT! I wish you would've killed Ryou though...

Um... I have a question. You know mew crystal I was wondering if her name was Anya or if she was just a made up character... WE Chocolate!

I don't like Ryou.I mean I haven't seen the show but for some reason i just don't like him and and nice /Ichigo 4ever!

Why don't they live together?

Both:lol.

hey nice story I'm sad that the fight scene didn't last longer but oh well, and i'm also sorry that it was short but i have a stupid question why did you name the kids after the french apple and black? And also you probably know this but one of the mews in petite mew mew is named ringo which is japanese for apple, just thought you should know.

Kaya342