It was . . Okay, I'll be honest. I could not even finish reading the second (or third) paragraph it was so boring - and it had nothing to do with Spongebob at all.

You were out of character, the story line had nothing to do with Spongebob, etc. etc.

Sorry, but I don't think this is a very good fiction.

This story was very interesting but I don't think it had anything to do with valentines day and I didn't know that the person talking was spongebob. i didn't like how sad it was but that's just me otherwise it was very interesting and kept me hooked. especially when they said no one was there and the whole bomb thing went off. weird

make more spongebob stories! they r awesome! :P this ones good too! :P

What the hell was that? Really come on, no offense but this is just stupid.

wow! I love your stories! I wish you wrote in my high school's paper. Your Spongebob stories are the kind of stories I crave every day. You better make more soon.

It was incredible...but my small brain is still trying to figure it out...give me moments I might get it...Is it supposed to kind of make sense even without reading the other story...whatever it was? Oh well.. Whatever, you are awesome!

Even though i read this chapter before, i'll review it again. Excellent, excellent, excellent, did i mention it was an excellent chapter? Well, i said once and i'll say it again...IT'S AN EXCELLENT CHAPTER! Please write more stories like this. ;)