This was really good, I liked your take on it and it's different (in a good way) that it's from Ida's perspective. I like the idea of Max and Vincent going away and developing some sort of understanding...Anyway good story, I hope to read more of your stuff soon :)

Most Colatteral fanfic is a huge pile of crap, littered with silly plots and mary sues who all mysteriously hook up with Vincent, this on the other hand was a breath of fresh air! Tactfull and not overly obvious, this is a wonderful piece of writing!

I like your story; in character for all three of them.

I don't see your story as AU. It's not like Max took Vincent's pulse or something on the MTA.

Hope the guys are having fun in Mexico.

Felaine

great story! so this is an AU right? and just to be sure...Vincent isn't dead...Max fled to Mexico with him...told the police that vincent WAS dead..and they left Annie back in the US...?