 kara D 2008-07-05 . chapter 1 hey, wow, loved that fic, it was the best i've heard in a long time, just apprentice stuff, cool. hope you continue and also i have my own but they aren't anything like yours, so fantasy and just plain myself, any who, all i'm saying is you know how to write a mind manipulating fic, keep on keepin` on. hope to here more this fall.
~kara D |
 AdrenalineRush 2008-06-04 . chapter 20 Personally, I liked the epilogue. It shows just how smart Slade is. :)
Anyway, I adored this fic. I haven't seen a good one in a long time (I've been hanging around other fandoms) and so when I went back to TT and saw all the greats again, I just drooled. I missed the "good stuff" and this my friend, is the "good stuff"
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 AdrenalineRush 2008-06-03 . chapter 9 Okay, I'm really going to give a good review at the end of the story, but I just want to say real quick is that I love X's comebacks. You're so good at doing them.
“Tell me one thing,” Robin began.
“What I think of your outfit?” X shot back.
=D
“Fine, you caught me,” Red X sighed. “I took the cell. I needed a really, really big battery for my flashlight, so—"
I like that one even better. :) Awesome story! LOVE IT! |
 AdrenalineRush 2008-06-03 . chapter 6 Just want to say right now that I LOVE this fic! It is wonderful how well you portray all these characters, Slade and Rob are great and you're doing an awesome job w/ Red X. It especially stands out b/c so many people portray him like some sex-crazed moron. So, good job at that.
I read the Robin el Dorko fic. ~shudders~ I wanted to wash my eyes afterwards. So disgusting and untrue! Ugh, I'm glad that writer doesn't allow unknown readers to review, otherwise I may have lost it and flamed.
Otherwise, great job with this! It kind of reminds me of Rena Redhead's What? fic. (real good, if you haven't read, you should read) |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-24 . chapter 20Awesome story! I loved the ending! A Red X and Raven pairing kind of pops into my mind and I find it cute! And that poor cat! Lol, I'm just glad that Red X and Mouschi are reunited again. Robin and Starfire are cute too, in some way. Then Slade and his blackmail, I had a feeling that he really didn't have any blackmail on Robin and I'm glad you did that. It added a twist and the fact that it was Robin's fear that kept him, that was a very nice touch! You are one amazing author! |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-24 . chapter 19Oh Red X, that last comment of his was funny! One chapter left, oh no! I don't want it to end! But this chapter was awesome! The fighting, the planning, the escape, oh how I love Slade and Robin and Red X and all of the other Titans! |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-24 . chapter 18Yay, a big team up against Slade! But, will it be enough? I highly doubt it. I wonder if Slade already knows that the Titans are there, it wouldn't surprise me. |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-24 . chapter 17Praise, praise, love, joy! Now Red X is off the hook, until Slade figures it out and beats the snot out of him once more. Red X and the Teen Titans all working together to stop Slade and his blackmail over Robin, which I still have no idea what it is. I love this story and I don't want it to end but there's only three chapters left! |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-24 . chapter 16Lol, I thought Slade hitting Red X with a newspaper was awesome! O, the Titans did get Slade good! He's going to be very mad and probably take it out on Red X, if the theift can get back to him. |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-23 . chapter 15Stupid parents are making me get off now, but I will not be able to sleep tonight without thoughts of Slade, Robin, and Red X! Speaking of which, aw poor Robin and Red X! Beatings aren't fun and Slade's being a jerk again, but I still can't help but love him, love them all. My three favorite characters from Teen Titans all in one amazing story! |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-23 . chapter 14Oh yeah! I bet Robin can't wait to hit someone, especially the person who got him into this situation! Slade's so amazing, I can't help but love how his mind works and how cruel he can be sometimes...most times. No Beast Boy, you were on to something connecting to Robin! Go back you fool! |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-23 . chapter 13The Titans are mad and worried, with every right to be, Slade's ecstatic, Red X is now suicidal, and Robin's just utterly depressed, if not yet he will be soon. Yep, you have a wonderful story going on here! It may be past midnight, I may have practice in the morning, and I may be dead tired, but I'm not going to sleep until I finish this brilliant story! |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-23 . chapter 12Brilliant! Slade Wilson himself couldn't have thought of a better idea! To keep Robin in the dark about what he's using to keep the boy in check and to keep Red X as well, simply Slade like! Now that he has two apprentices, two skilled fighters that hate each other's guts but not as much as they hate him, Slade is set. Poor Red X, for a moment I though Slade was going to keep his promise as well. He always seemed like a man of his word, but he doesn't have to if he really doesn't want to. |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-23 . chapter 11Maybe Red X was a better apprentice than he had thought. He really did pick up a few traits and skills from Slade. But now, my pity that I had once had for Red X now goes out to Robin of course. Although the boy should had known better then to fight Red X on his own, he's still but a human boy capable of making mistakes. I understand why Red X is doing it as well, he's selfish and 'looking out for number one'. But just like last time, he'll end up doing the right thing in the end; I know he will. |
 Alonein-Darkness7 2007-03-23 . chapter 10Oh wow, I was going to stop now, halfway through to call it a night, but with that last line there's no way I possibly can! This is getting amazingly good and there is so much going on and when it all crashes together; I just can't wait! Awesome, simply beautiful! |
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