Nice chapter! :)

Luv this chapter sooooo muchhhh!

Luv the chapter! :)

Oh nuuuu! :'(

Geez... What if Gai and Kakashi really include something like that for their rivalry contests? Hmmmm... A child can be the only remnant of a dead father, after all, that's why Tenten is happy having their child...

Geeeezzzz you're really such a good writer even if I don't feel like reading angst right now... :D

I like how you used Greek mythology as one of your themes... I'm excited to read what you have written in relation to Chapter 614... .

This is the first Naruto fan fiction I read- and I fell in love with Neji and Tenten once again. Very moving, I actually cried for Tenten, felt her pain, mirrored her grief. Thank you for creating this wonderful story! Since it was mentioned to be a trilogy, hope to see the 3rd installment soon :)

You have made me fell in love with Nejiten again. The story is so beautiful and words cannot describe just how brilliantly this story was done. Please continue with your talent.

Beautiful! Love it! _

I simply love the way you keep everyone in character, and filling in the blanks that Kishimoto doesn't. The emotions in here are fantastic. Enjoyed.

YEAH! Sorry...I love how that ended. YAY! :)

I liked that!

"Death could not be fixed by hard work."

Great line! ...Man, it's a good thing that you have 100 fics because at the rate I'm reading them I'm going to run out quickly. Ah, well - it's a testament to your writing! :)

*SQUEALS* I loved this story! I hope you write the third installment soon! I look forward to it!

that was good

...that is all i can say...