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| Boleyn 2006-06-18 ch 2,  | abuseGreat story please continue if you want |
| Shevaun 2005-03-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseI really like this. It seems real but how old are they when this is set? I can't wait to read more, update soon. |
| AngelMouse5 2005-03-24 ch 2, | abuseThis was so beautifully written, so well done it brought tears to my eyes. You have captured all the other's emotions so well, especially Gordon and Virgil trying to help John as they know that he doesn't have the experience like they do on rescues. Good work, really good work. |
| mcj 2005-03-23 ch 2, | abuseVery interesting chapter. Each brother dealing with their emotions re the failed rescue in a different way. John would find it difficult to cope given he is the least experienced. I particularly liked the descriptive manner in which you portrayed Gordon's reactions White Rose. Always the joker, the serious side to him simply sends shivers down the spine. mcj |
| zeilfanaat 2005-03-23 ch 2, | abuseWow. When you said you were writing another chapter, I didn't really know what to expect. However, I did expect it to be good... guess what. You lived up to my expectations! Really, this is good! Really nice chapter. OK, so I suppose you *could* stop here... but it would benefit from another chapter. (Hey, I'm not selfish! I mean...you like to write, I like to read your stories, so we would both benefit... ;) ) Anyway, well done! |
| mcj 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abuseLove it. Just love it. You captured how John would truly feel in the event of a failure. Descriptive, emotional and graphic. Well done. Is there another Chapter? mcj |
| Princess Tyler Briefs 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseAw! *huggles all five boys* That would be amazingly hard. Death is a hard thing to deal with, no matter the circumstances, but children dying is the worst. There was so much they could have done *tears welling up in eyes* That was an excellent story. I really enjoyed it. Mind if I stick it in my C2 group? |
| Agent Five 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful story and so much contained within its relative shortness. You say in your comment that you don't know where it came from but I should think there's a muse out there in the ether with a huge satisfied grin on it's face! Love it. Well done. |
| zeilfanaat 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseTalking about depressed! First reaction: wow! Second reaction: wow! ;) Really, this is good! You seem to be really good writing one-shots... ok, ok, you're good. Period. Looking forward to an update on whichever story you write. :) |
| ladc 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abuseVery touching. |
| AngelMouse5 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, what a soulful, beautifully written peice. Nice and angsty and full of true reflections to the horrible situation they found themselves in. As he said, a sucess rate of 100% is impossible, but you wonder how they would cope when they didn't succeed don't you. This was beautifully written, and plus it's John - always good to read John fics... |