Poor Daxxie!

Well...if I lived in Haven City Jak wouldnt worry about that. ;D

Just saying.

Im glad this is a bitter ending, its a change of pace.

OMG! I feel so bad for Daxter! D: I wanted to cry again! You are too good at this! Go write a book! I will buy it I swear! You are that good at getting me emotional! I hope you do have some happy stories too, though. :). Cuz if i dont find one I'm gonna end up curled up bawling my eyes out! XD. Thank you though. I love crying!

That was very well written, in a relatively short story you managed to capture location, character, plot and the story climax. Though being a huge fan of the very so cute Daxter, the story was very sad. (Good job!)

Wow. Cool. I think you did a great job on this one. Keep up the excellent work.

Poor Daxter. Good work. So sad I'm crying. Sorry if I mispelled something, hard to see through the tears.

:( I liked it. Poor Dax.

It's cute and yet sad all at the same time. I kinda feel sorry for Daxter though.

*squeaks* Aw...poor Daxter...

Good fic! _

Wow that was really cute and detail out. I don't really read too many TornXJak stories, but I have to say this one is good. Keep up the good work

o_o

AGHRGHR! I should have made you promise to never TOUCH Torn/Jak! Bad Jemi! BAD, BAD WOMAN! *sobs* ... And still.

A LITTLE angst? I knew the whole thing was angsty. Beautiful and angsty and SHIBBIES. I love my angst. *fluff* Oh god, did you have to break my heart as such on V-day? Gh. Poor Jak, though. Daxter's view of him is just... supremely endearing. I just.. JUST... WRITHED. Im like NO, Jak NEEDS to be in charge, but... he must get tired of it. Oh, I dont know. *SOBS*

I need to go and write stuff. I LOVE YOU JEMI.

*sniffles* I love mushy angsty stuff like this. It was especially good because I didn't have any clue what was happening until it did. And when I reread it I was like 'Oh!'. I feel so bad for Daxter though. *sniffles*

:'( That was so cute... Poor Dax... :) Keep it up won't ya?