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The Queen of Confusion 2007-11-14 ch 21,	abuseThis was great!! I love the story that is unfolding. I am glad that the AI's are getting more rights. I also hope things will work out between the restpective couples; Dylan and Rommie, Trance and Dylan and it looks like Sam and Jack. Oh and I also hope that Harper can find some one who loves him. Great story! SARAH
ilexx 2006-07-22 ch 21,	abuseI remember now: yes, I thought your insight on the AI treatment quite awesome, really. Hasn't changed much since.
Xeromem 2005-05-04 ch 20,	abuseThis a very exciting story to read. I still get a charge out of it even though I have already read it several times before.
Xeromem 2005-04-08 ch 1,	abuseI loved this story the first time I read it and loved it even more each time I read it again. You guys are a great writing team and you should do some more stories together.
L. C. Brotherton 2005-04-03 ch 21,	abuseSTANDING OVATION! This was completely excellent.
L. C. Brotherton 2005-04-03 ch 20,	abuseWow! What an explosive chapter (no pun intended)! For a moment, I thought Harper had turned into Harry Kim (who always gets captured/hurt/blindsided)from Voyager. The action was evenly paced, but not rushed. The entirety was very creepy and tense. Nicely done, indeed!
L. C. Brotherton 2005-03-25 ch 19,	abuseThree cheers for Dylan and the 98% who tossed the Triumvirate's orders back in the trio of faces! I think I smell a much-deserved civil rights act for the AI population, and it's just around the corner. Ah, I simply love the weapons that keep being developed in this story! Looking very forward to the next part!
L. C. Brotherton 2005-03-21 ch 18,	abuseWow! There is some great action and drama here! As always, the tactics and comat sequences were splendid and described to perfection. You had me sweating it out for a second, but the good guys won the day. Bravo on the twist at the end with the orders from the Triumvirate! I'll be anxious to see which course of action Dylan will take.
PeaceKeeper Dax 2005-03-21 ch 18, anon.	abuse“In order to forestall any possibility of a High Guard warship’s artificial intelligence command and control entity from joining forces with the Replicators, the commanding officers of all High Guard ships are ordered to erase the personality modules of said command and control entities and to deactivate and dismantle any and all ships avatars.” :oHarper's gonna hit the war path! It also seems that the collecters are now very much in control of the new commonwealth Can't wait to see how the crew and SG:1 get out of this. Great work. -PeaceKeeper Dax Rattler PPs can't wait ta see if Harper offers to hide rommie in his Brain again I can see him doing whatever it takes to protect his romdoll;)
LittleRedhead 2005-03-16 ch 17,	abuseAh more action from Dylan's group. That's good to see. Too bad the sniper died. He might have been able to give some valuable information.
L. C. Brotherton 2005-03-15 ch 16,	abuseBravo! I am appreciating more and more the plight of the AI in the Commonwealth. You've caused me to examine this on an entirely new level. I like the empathy toward the situation that you allow Daniel to voice. It's very in character for him, and provides a very nice counter-point to generate some soul-searching on Dylan's evaluation of the situation.
L. C. Brotherton 2005-03-15 ch 15,	abuseWhat a tragic and bleak scene to wander through! The descriptions were excellent, and you nearly inspired an asthma attack from the smoke & stench!
L. C. Brotherton 2005-03-06 ch 14,	abuseLoved Harper's sudden realization that the actual conditions for his newly-created weapon were different that the test environment.
L. C. Brotherton 2005-03-06 ch 13,	abuseI was wondering how you would handle this change in Trance from purple to gold. Nicely done.
L. C. Brotherton 2005-03-06 ch 11,	abuseOne of the things I always enjoy about your stories is the exquisite detail you employ with describing battles, soldier's reactions, and the logic behind the strategies. It's never dry, the pace and flow are excellent, and I always feel like I have had a tiny lesson tossed in for good measure. It's an attractive feature!

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