great storry. good job wc




Sander Dolce

Hey Wesker-Chick, do you remember me? I have something important to tell you. Please contact me as soon as posible.

I started this directly after the previous, and stayed up until 0400. Went to sleep, got up, and ate breakfast while continued to read. It is close to 1400.

There are very few stories which I've been interested enough in to do such, and this is including official and non-official authors. It is really a shame that this is not official either, because it is one hell of a work. Despite the whole violation of my "don't screw with the original story" policy, you did a damn good job (of screwing with the story AND making it good, that is).

Hey, excellent story. Well done for completing another brilliant tale of the Wesker siblings. I can't wait to see Alex's new adventure's, I'm sure they're gonna be awesome.
Congrats on completing this, and I hope to see some new work of yours up soon.

You kick **, great epilogue, really nice wrap-up of the Memories series. Nice kiss too :) Waiting on the edge of my seat with baited breath and tapping toes for the next series.

Playing CVX will probably be a let down after reading your tale of the events :) especially without Alex. “Oh come on, you can’t tell me this shirt doesn’t look cuter on me than it does on Chris.” - lol

The Albert/Alex confrontation read much better with the change, the part you took out about the mansion incident was definately what was throwing it off.

Good chapter, got a good cinematic feel to it (basically it played well visually in my head while reading it). The line “Well, the ** ain’t standing now.” happen to come from Rain of the RE movie? Like the little page breaks for scene changes. Keep up the good work!

Aw...Wesker's being mean again. But, I suppose that's characteristic, and that scene with Alex and Alfred was so sweet.
Good work, keep it up and I look forward to the next chappy

Good chapter. You did Alfred really well, I think.

Oh. I like it so far.

Could you have a few more misspellings in your title and summary? Hate to think of what the actual story is like.

I loved it. The bandersnatch battle is well discribed not that I expected less. Wesker has well placed emotions and they aren't too much to digest when compared to the Wesker of the game. Loved Alex's acting outburst and Chris's remorse. I like the developing romance. I hope this review is helpful in your future writing, friend.

Really good stuff! After you get this finished and refined to your liking, you should try to publish some of your stories.

You...are a fantastic writer. Another great chapter, and I hope to see another up soon