Very poignant, powerful ending. The only thing that could have changed is the frequency of the "Sasuke-kun..."'s. Bunching Sasuke's sentences together instead of seperating them couldn't hurt.

But still. Very touching drabble.

omg that was fantastic! it almost made me cry at the end!... that was very touching... *sniff*

oh my gosh! gasp and died..

nice tragedy..eek!

Aw...that's so sad...sobb...

oh! I HATE YOU!

why are you so good at it?...

Sasuke, is that you?

Wow. I am so glad I decided to go through your profile.

This one is, again, amazing. The repretition of 'Sasuke-kun' added a dramatic affect, and the ending just...sent chills up my spine.

Cute and sad... I really liked it, espeically the repitition of 'Sasuke-kun'.

Aw! Very good! I was all o.O at the end. Awesome. _

Woah O.o

That ending... even though this fic is really short it's really good... I got this weird tingly feeling in my head when I read the last sentences...

wow.. that's deep *_* lol

I really liked it _ good job!

I like it- it's really good, keep up the great work!

aw

_ cute

-Breezy

pretty...

Sakura is too much of a child to understand love yet, I think. Too young to actually understand what she was really saying to Sasuke when he left.

so Sakura killed Sasuke in the end?

I don't think Sasuke was ever a child after the massacre.

Still, a great fic!

Good job i like it! _ keep writing more stories