thank you finally can't wait for next one wonderful job

continue soon!! I love it

you can't leave me hang'ng like this don't wait to so long this time

moore please very good

cool story...

First, a few useful things. There's a few typos, you've put hold instead of whole and Yay instead of yeah. Not sure why, and there's a comma or two missing here and there. Best thing I can recomend is getting a beta.

Other than that, nice to see a new chapter, and the story progressing. Am waiting eagerly to see just what is going on, and to see Chaya again. Thanks for writting another chapter.

MORE! LOL I need more lol!

hi again It had been long time for me to return your reviews all about your other chapters,they are nice and very interesting story.
Jenn R

the chapter was great the story is deff geting more interesting. I can't wait to here more

okay, first off, interesting idea, however there are numerous spelling mistakes in there. I suggest you either get a beata or copy paste and run spell checker, otherwise good first attempt.

Great story! I like how they look like their ancient ancestors & i can't wait to see where you'll go next! Please post asap!

This is so good. I really like your story line. Please up date soon.

good chap I can't wait to hear more. It is sounding more and more interesting with each chap.

I love this story. It's so interesting. I can't wait to read some more chapters.

great chapter you really keep thing intresting. Can't wait o hear more.