Can't say much about this fic (at least nothing that's already been said).

Continue writing.

Review 7: Nice stroy line and good writing but a bit more dercibing and maybe a bit more story (maybe some action) would make this story great

-insert girl-ish squeals- that was adorable!

cute story
kay completely irrelevant but i just took a quiz to see who 'my true love' in naruto would be and its GAI.
D:

Nice story. Too bad you put everything in 1 chapter, its a little fast.

You like Siam Shade. Just for that you get points. Also, I liked the NaruHina in your fic, so, you get more points. I like your plot behind the story. Are you going to make any sequels or continue the story? Keep writing! Siam Shade rocks!!

a little rushed? a proposial in within 1 hour he comes back? i know naruto is a knid of guy that would love the world to know if he loved someone but isin't it pushing it al little too far with a proposal?

Nice story, I like the way Naruto started developing feelings for Hinata when he left and allowed those feelings to mature over time. I'd like to see more of this story.