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LuffysAngel 2007-07-20 ch 16,	abuse. Love
The Flying Pen 2007-02-22 ch 17,	abuseOh so good. I have a class in 8 hours and I need to sleep, but this story was EXCELLENT! You captured them all so well! Your characterization is stupendous, and for a non-native speaker, your writing and grammar were practically flawless! I only found one mistake in 17 chapters - amazing! :) It was a tiny one, too. Haha, throughout the story, I kept reading the word "clan" as "crew" in my head. I think that's what we call them - a crew. But clan sounds like closer nakama to me, anyway. Keep writing. Write til your hands bleed! ;) ~Pen~
The Flying Pen 2007-02-22 ch 4,	abuseOnly in chapter 4, but this is great! I loved your first action scene. :) I love how you write Usopp too. Way to go! Onward! ~Pen~
sapphermine 2006-10-26 ch 17,	abuseCongratulations on a work SUPERBLY done! I hadn't even thought what could have happened if they were really captured back then, but this was great! And I loved that letter. It sent tingles all over my body. 'Once a pirate. Always a pirate.' Very nice. I loved that! Great job!
Capn' McKay & Eli T Rick 2006-08-29 ch 17, anon.	abuseCapn' McKay: let me tell you that this story is sure one in a million. i have my own tale to tell of just reading it to my sibling. i have stayed up from 1:00pm-2:00pm then 9:00pm until 12:16am. in excitment. right now i'm feeling faint from lack of air because of the pace i have been reading this story in! After about one fainting spell each me and my sister must agree that this story is THE BEST on fanfiction!! anyway i'm going to bed now becuase i can now the stories over. Thank you for the added excitment to mine and SURELY my siblings life. good-night! Eli T Rick: well my sisters butt was stuck to the chair. OKAY NOW FOR MY YELLING SPRE! I LOVED THIS STORY MORE THAN ANY FANFICT EVER! I MEAN NO PAIRINGS THE SEMI-DRAMA THE HAPPY THE SAD IT WAS ALL SO PERFECTLY DONE! I SWEAR YOU SHOULD BE A WRITER WHEN YOU GROW UP! WELL YOU'VE GIVEN ME AN ADRENALEN RUSH!THANKSTHANKTHANKTHANKTHANKTHANKTHATKYOU I THINK I'M GONNA SING! ITS MY HAPPY HAT OH MY HAPPY HAT ITS SO HAPPILY ON ME, YES MY HAPPY HAT OH MY HAPPY HAT IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY! SHANKS I WANT SOME GROG TO SELABRATE SHANKS: HERE I'LL HAVE A DRINKING COMPATITION ME: YAYAYAYAYAY OKAY, WELL I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE LIKE THIS. I'M GONNA CHUG SOME GROG TILL YOU WRITE SOMETHING ELSE! hears chanting CHUG CHUG CHUG ME: LETS GET WASTED!(one of my favourite quotes from the show ever!!)
4getregret 2006-07-22 ch 17,	abuseWow...What a great story! Just...wow.
bananawings72 2006-07-19 ch 17, anon.	abuseFANTASTIC STORY! I declare this the best One Peice story i've ever read! AMAZING! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! ^_^
Wolfwood11 2006-06-02 ch 17,	abuseWow, that was a wonderful story! Your characters were amazing and accurate, and the way you used the whole Straw Hat crew was just awesome. Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it throughly. ^_^
Londondaime 2006-05-08 ch 17,	abuseVery nice. I especially liked the part where Usopp insisted on carrying out the challenge and the letter to Vivi.
pitupaso 2006-01-22 ch 17,	abuseI have no words. I winced everytime Sanji was mentioned. Stupid idiot, he's crazy for injuring his feet and then walk around acting like he's not injured... though I think it's fine for Zoro to keep on fighting despite the amount of bloodloss XD; 'cos he's mad like that. Luffy's mild depression at not being able to get Vivi as a crewmember was sort of... I dunno. It irked me. In the good way. :D I was like, argh, Luffy, get better now! I really liked how you took turns with each of the characters, writing out their individual fears and thoughts and all. I personally enjoyed the bit where Chopper was alone with Luffy in the Marine Base and there was that sudden fear of putting in the wrong herbs. It was just so... Like, BAM "OMG, CHOPPER! crymelt" Like that. He's such a dear. The character interactions were great, too! You managed to cover nearly all the One Piece pairings in a single fiction XD; I loved the ZoroChopper interaction. he wasn't really that OOC, and it's cute. And the letter, the written argument between Sanji and Zoro = priceless. XD; I can imagine them actually bothering to reply to each other on the letter, and then Sanji reading the last line and going for his throat. XD; Awesome fiction. I don't know how you managed to write all of that without going insane, but you did it, and hats off to you for that. XD Fave!
Ryla 2005-12-19 ch 17,	abuseInteresting story! You did very well, moved along nicely and had a nice plot! Some misspellings but nothing glaring so over all I'd give the story an A+!! Thanks for your hard work!
Saiyako 2005-11-10 ch 17,	abuseWhat a ride... It starts off intense, and stays that way, right up until those last few chapters. I love the idea of this, and the way you've pulled it off. Heh, of course the Marines couldn't hold them for more than 3 days... It would take me too long to list all the things I like about this story, so I'll just mention a couple of things I especially love - Zoro being able to sense the spirits of the swords, and the letter to Vivi at the end. There is one thing that seemed odd, though... careful handwriting that looks like a prescription? Um, but doctors are notorious for having MESSY handwriting... Anyway, it's still great.
Lenna Hunter 2005-08-30 ch 17, anon.	abusevery original, well written you are one of the most best authors out their, looking forward to reading more of your stories
blackfuzzdevil 2005-06-18 ch 17,	abuseYour story was adorable! You kept the StrawHats in character and your writing style is excelent! Great Job!
The Mad shoe1 2005-05-04 ch 17,	abuseWonderful fanfic, you did a outstanding job.

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