Wow, I'm impressed. This was really nice and brilliantly written. Thanks for posting it.

I really liked the letter at the end, with the written "argument" between Sanji and Zoro. Nice fic overall, too!

ok. I've finally finished this story and I have to say...
THAT WAS AWESOME! Your stories tottaly wicked! the "What if" type of stories are always a peek of interest but this was truely one of the best I've ever came across! I'm sad it has to end though... If you ever write a sequil I'll definitly read!

Lovely story! Nice detail and descriptions, and very nice pacing. And I'm glad that after all the suffering, they had a happy ending. :D

Ah another good fic. So nice to sit back with satisfaction and not worry about the plot falling off a cliff or the author never finishing. Well done, please pass Go and collect $200.

Awesome fic! I loved it! ^^

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Oh so good. I have a class in 8 hours and I need to sleep, but this story was EXCELLENT! You captured them all so well! Your characterization is stupendous, and for a non-native speaker, your writing and grammar were practically flawless! I only found one mistake in 17 chapters - amazing! :) It was a tiny one, too.

Haha, throughout the story, I kept reading the word "clan" as "crew" in my head. I think that's what we call them - a crew. But clan sounds like closer nakama to me, anyway.

Keep writing. Write til your hands bleed! ;)

~Pen~

Only in chapter 4, but this is great! I loved your first action scene. :) I love how you write Usopp too. Way to go!

Onward!

~Pen~

Congratulations on a work SUPERBLY done! I hadn't even thought what could have happened if they were really captured back then, but this was great!
And I loved that letter. It sent tingles all over my body.
'Once a pirate. Always a pirate.' Very nice. I loved that!
Great job!

Capn' McKay: let me tell you that this story is sure one in a million. i have my own tale to tell of just reading it to my sibling. i have stayed up from 1:00pm-2:00pm then 9:00pm until 12:16am. in excitment. right now i'm feeling faint from lack of air because of the pace i have been reading this story in! After about one fainting spell each me and my sister must agree that this story is THE BEST on fanfiction!! anyway i'm going to bed now becuase i can now the stories over. Thank you for the added excitment to mine and SURELY my siblings life. good-night!

Eli T Rick: well my sisters butt was stuck to the chair. OKAY NOW FOR MY YELLING SPRE! I LOVED THIS STORY MORE THAN ANY FANFICT EVER! I MEAN NO PAIRINGS THE SEMI-DRAMA THE HAPPY THE SAD IT WAS ALL SO PERFECTLY DONE! I SWEAR YOU SHOULD BE A WRITER WHEN YOU GROW UP! WELL YOU'VE GIVEN ME AN ADRENALEN RUSH!THANKSTHANKTHANKTHANKTHANKTHANKTHATKYOU I THINK I'M GONNA SING! ITS MY HAPPY HAT OH MY HAPPY HAT ITS SO HAPPILY ON ME, YES MY HAPPY HAT OH MY HAPPY HAT IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY! SHANKS I WANT SOME GROG TO SELABRATE
SHANKS: HERE I'LL HAVE A DRINKING COMPATITION
ME: YAYAYAYAYAY OKAY, WELL I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE LIKE THIS. I'M GONNA CHUG SOME GROG TILL YOU WRITE SOMETHING ELSE! *hears chanting* CHUG CHUG CHUG
ME: LETS GET WASTED!(one of my favourite quotes from the show ever!!)

Wow...What a great story! Just...wow.

FANTASTIC STORY! I declare this the best One Peice story i've ever read! AMAZING! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! ^_^

Wow, that was a wonderful story! Your characters were amazing and accurate, and the way you used the whole Straw Hat crew was just awesome. Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it throughly. ^_^

Very nice. I especially liked the part where Usopp insisted on carrying out the challenge and the letter to Vivi.